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28-07-2019, 05:42 PM
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CHAPTER -1
Hello doston. Mai naya writer hooon. Main ek kahani shuru karne ja raha hu joki hai ek jamindar ghar ki bahu ki. Jiska jeevan hawas badal kar rakh deti hain. Hawas ek aisi khatarnak chis jo usko ghar sansar sabkuch vula deti hai. sirf pyaas bujhana chorke
(Ye purane zamane ke samay mein sthapit hai jab zamindaro ka raaj tha.)
Asha karta hoon aap sabka sath milega.
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Congratulations for the new story.
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Yeh kahani hai ek zamindar pariwar ki. Zamindar saab to ab nahi rahe. Lekin unke bete arnab ji ab malik hai. Wo hamesha busy rehte hai zamindari dekhval karne mein aur business mein. Apne biwi bacche kobhi thik se dhyan nahi de pate hain. Unki patni anupama, jitna khubsurat nam usse bhi zada khubsoorat thi wo. Arnab ji ki maa ki ab umar ho gayi thi, lekin apni bahu se bohot pyar karti thi. Anupama ka ek 5 saal ka beta tha rakesh (pyaar se sabhi usko chintu bulate the). Pati sasuma aur chintu yehi tha anupama ka jeevan. Lekin usse kya pata tha ki uski yeh jivan ab badal ne ja raha hai.
Next update jald ayega.
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Keep going and all the best for the new start ?
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(28-07-2019, 06:38 PM)Arjun_destiny Wrote: Keep going and all the best for the new start ?
Thanks. I will try to make you all happy with my stories
Next update tonight.
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Aap logo ko story kaisa lag raha hai. Zaroor feedback dena
Aj ka naya update
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Jamindar parivar ke apne apne kuch kushti larnei wale, paltu gunde hote the. Inke bhi aise paltu gunde the jo jabardasti logo se paise wasool karna,zaroorat pe marna pitna ye sab karte the. Aur raat ko haveli ki chaukidari bhi karte thei. Un gundo mein sabse khatarnak tha Raka. 6 foot ka hatta katta. Dikhne nein bhi daravna tha. Sar par ek bhi baal nahi thai lekin bohot bara much ta jisko woh bahut garv se taauv deta tha.danav jaisa sharir isliye usse sab darte the. Ekbar to chintu usko apne samne dekh kar rone lag gaya tha.
Raka bahut zalim tha aur uski ek kamjori thi sundar aurtein. Wo abtak jahi naukri kiya tha wahaki kisi na kisi aurat ke sath milan karta tha. Usko gharelu aurto ko nasht aur apavitra karke unke saath sex karne mein bahut maja ata hai. Yaha pe ake bhi wo is ilaakein ki aurton ko buri najar se dekhta tha par jab woh jamindar ki biwi anupama ko dekha to woh pagal hi ho gaya .kya khoobsurti kya sharir. Pari thi pari.
Raka jabvi anupama ke barein mein sochta tha uska 9 inch ka bhayanak lund khara ho jata tha. Ekbar to anupama snan ghar aakar bathroom mein chintu ko snan kara rahi thi jiske karan uske badan par bhi paani akar saree bhiga diyatha usi waqt Raka kisi kaam ke wajah se waha akar anupama ko aise bhige badan dekh kar ruk gaya. Aur chup ke uske jism ko dekhne laga. Uska lund khara ho gaya tha. Raka itna garam ho gaya tha ke usne socha bacche ke samne hi anupama ko pakar kar chum doo par woh apne ap ko rok liya.
Aur soch ne laga kaise is khubsurat aurat ke chut mein apna lund dala jai?
Lekin use nahi pata tha Ke uska yeh sapna bahut jald sach hone jaa raha hai.
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Bahut badhiya update! Bahut hi shandaar aur lajawab
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RAKA AB KYA KARTA HAI. ANUPAMA KA KYA HOTA HAI?
JANNE KELIYE KAHANI KE SAATH BANE RAHE.
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New Update
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Kuch dino ke baad kamla naam ki ek 50 saal ki aurat jamindaar ghar mein kaam karne aayi. Woh dekhne me daravni thi. Aur bahut chalak aurat thi aur laalchi bhi. Use pata tha is jamindar parivaar ka ek bahut bada gaheno(gold) se bhara baksa hai. Par woh kaha hai sirf jamindar ki biwi matlab Anupana ki saas ko pata hai.
Kamla woh sona pana chahti thi. Uski laalchi nazar anupama ke saas se bhi nahi chupa. Unhone apni bahu se kaha bhi ke kamla se zara bachke rehna beti aur apne bacche ko iske aas paas bhi mat ane dena.yeh mujhe thik nahi lag rahi hai.
Kamla goshal(cowshed) ke paas wali room mein akeli rehti thi. Aur sochti rehti kaisa wo aamir ban jaye.
Aise hi kuch din bit e...... kamla jaha rehti thi ushi jagah ke paas Raka bhi raatko paheridaari karta tha. Usko bhi kamla par shaq tha sali kuch sahi nahi lagti.
Ekdin wo paheda de raha tha to usko kuch awaz sunai di toh Raka chupke se andar aya to dekha ek saya chup chup ke anupama ke saas ke kamre mein jaa rahi thi. RAKA mein bahut himmat tha to usne jump karke aur daud ke us saye ke paas aagaya aur uska haat pakad liya aur pucha.......
Raka: sala, suaar ki aulad kaun hai tu. Chaddar hata ke apna chehra dikha warna!
Saya: arre main huun kamla haat chod. Bapre kitna jor hai tere hat mein.
Raka: itni raat ko idhar kya kam hai be?
Kamla: dar ke mare arre aaaaisa kkkuch nahi.mmmai to bus tahel rahi ttthi. Nnind nahi aaarahi hai.
Raka: sali jhoit bolti hai.main ka nahi janta tu kya karne ja rahi thi. Sona dhundne us buddhi ki room mein.kyun haina?
Kamla aab haskar: haa re salein. Jab tujhe pata chal gaya hai to chupake kya faida. Main zaroor woh sona dhund lungi.
Raka: par mujhe bhi hissa dena padega warna main sabko saach bol dunga
Kamla: arre wo to dunga hi. Magar mujhe madat karna padega. Karega na?
Raka: arre zarooor. Sona! Na jaane kitna sona hai is haveli main.
Magar Raka ko kya pata tha ke use gold ke badle kya diamond milne wala hai. Chalta phirta nageena.
Saath bane rahiye. For upcoming updates. And story kaisi lag rahi hai. Comments kar ke baataein.
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Nice update... Waiting for next..
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Abhi apki story shuru hi hui hai dekhte hai aage kis tarah grow karti hai.
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Good Update Wait For Next Update Quick.
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Thank you all for your feedbacks. Update kal aayega. Dekhte hai Raka aur kamla kya karte hain.
Wait for the update..........
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Bahut hi majedar aur shandaar kahaani
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31-07-2019, 12:05 PM
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Aaj raat ko naya update aayega. Bahut hi zaruri update. Wait for the new update.
Raka aur kamla eksath mil kar kya karte hai? Janenge aaj raat ko.
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superb! bahut badhiya update!
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