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Adultery Meri Society

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Dear Readers,

Trying my hands on a new story. Some of you might have read my previous story and may not like me laving that one in between, but I got really busy and hence did not got time to update that one.

This new story will be based on Adultery theme as many readers have asked for it, considering there are many on incest in this section.

My schedule is really busy, hence I may not be able to give regular updates. So please be patient and I will try to provide updates as soon as I can, but no definite timeline.

And please do comment if you like the story & also you are welcome to provide your feedback or suggestion....
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"Assin thalle park ch sair karan challe? Tussi bhi chal lo"

Main laptop ton sir chuk ke dekheya, tan samane khadi janani dekh ke main, bas dekhda hi reh geya. Aisa nahi si ki main usnu pehali baar dekh reha si, par jad bhi usnu iddan sajhi dhaji nu dekhda, menu kuchh honn lag janda si. Khulle straight baal, muh te halka halka makeup, te paaya hoya punjabi suite, jo ki usade mummeyan te lakk  naal badde saleeke naal chipkeya hoya, gajab di shape de reha si. 
Eh janani hor koi nahi, meri gharwali Kavi si, jisade naal mere vyah nu koi 1-2 saal hi hoye si. 25 saal di kainth punjabi mutiyaar.

"Nahi yaar, menu kuchh office da kamm hai, tussi ja aao." 
Main usnu keha te oh jyada kuchh na bolde hoye bahar nu tur geyi kyunki usanu pta si ki main kam ch kaafi busy rehnda.
Usnu pichhon dekh ke menu badda maan jeha hoya, Usadi bund di shape ini mast si ki bas ki dassan. Te eh sab meri 2 saal di mehnat da hi kamaal si. Upron back naal chipkeya suite, lakk ton thalle iddan da modd lainda, ki bas dekhann waale di jaan hi kadd lenda. Te fer siddah thalle digda te, thalle paayi pajaami ton 3-4 inch door lamkda rehnda.

Fer oh gate khol ke sadde naal wale flat ch wad gayi, jithey ki ek aunty rehandi hai "Reet" jis naal usadi nami-nami jaan pechaan hoyi si.

Main thuhanu dass dema, ki main eh society ch kuchh 3-4 mahine pehlan hi move keeta si, te meri wife jo ki aam tor te sadde pind mere ghar waaleyan naal hi rehandi hai, oh 3-4 din pehlan hi itthey aayi hai. 1-2 din tan oh kaafi bore hoyi, par kal usdi jaan pehchaan saddi gwand wali aunty Reet naal hoyi, joki apane husband naal rehandi hai, te usada eklota munda bahar study karda hai.
Dekhann ch kaafi patola hai, te sunnann ch aaya ki society ch kaafi charche hai usade. 

Main apani society baare dass dema, ki eh gated society hai, jithey ki koi 400-500 flats honnge, te andar park, shops waigarah han, Te gate te security guards waigarah har bele rehande ne.

Khair main apane kamm ch busy ho geya, te 2 k ghante baad oh wapis aayi. "Hanji, haje mukeya nahi thuhada kamm" usane aaundi ne pucheya.

"Bas ho hi geya samjho" main laptop band karde ne keha. "Hor kidan reha sair sapata?" main usanu puchheya.

Wadiya reha, ek do auntiyan naal meri gall hoyi, te 1-2 meri humumar jananiyan bhi mil geiyan park ch.

"Chalo wadiya, hun tun jyada bore nahi hoya karengi", main usanu dekhdde keha.

Fer usane roti, paani da kamm shuru kar leya.
Raat nu jaddon assin bedroom ch peye si, te main usanu jaffi paake apane wal khich leya. Oh es bele nighty ch si, jo ki baddi hi silki te mulayam jehi si.
 Assin thodi deir idhar udhar diyan gallan kitiyan , te naal naal main usade mummeyan te lakk te hath waigarah ferda reha. Oh bhi meri chhati te hath fer rehi si.

Fer main apanna payjaama te kachha lah ke pare sutt ditta, te usade upar aa geya. Usadi nighty khol ke usade mummeyan te muh feran lagg peya.

 "Haaye, aaj tan baddi att lag rehi si. jadd thalle sair karan geyi si, Jee kar reha si ki uttey hi faddd ke koddi kar lema." main usade bhure bhure chucheyan nu muh ch lendeyan boleya.

"Haaye, te kar laini si, thuhanu rokeya si kise ne" usane shararti jehe andaaj ch keha. Waisey tan oh kaafi shareef jehi si, par usnu halka halka ganda bolna shuru kar ditta si, khaas kar jad oh garam ho jaandi si, par hajje bhi oh kaafi ghatt hi boldi si.

"Achha ji, eh gall hai" main usade bullan te bull chipkande ne keha.

"Hor ki tan" oh magron boli.

"Te je Reet aunty aa jandi tenu labhdi-labhdi fer?"

"Haaye, ki boli jaande ho?" usane keha.

Min fer apana lun usadi fudi di entry te rakhdey te halka halka usade upar feran lag peya.

"Dass na, je kite Reet aunty aa jande, te ki sochadi oh" main usanu jor laande ne puchheya.

"Menu ni pta" oh sharmadi jehi kehandi.

"Yaar, bol na, tu kadde ni mera saath dindi" Main naraj jehe hunde ne keha.

"Meton ni bol hunda, tussi hi bol do, k ki sochade?" Oh mere wal dekhadi boli.

"Sochdi ki, uhane tan aap garam ho jaana si, tenu unj koddi hoyi nu dekh ke. Te ki pta ohh bhi tere naal aapke koudi ho jaandi".

"Haaye, sacchin, fer tan tussi menu chadd uhe dwaale ho janna si." oh sharmande hoye boldi. Usadi awaaj hun thoddi kambann lag peyi si. Main samajh geya ki hun eh garam ho geyi si, kyunki chaahe oh ganda nahi boldi si, par mere ganda bolann te oh hor hi duniya ch pahunch jaandi si.

"Lai tera tan usda ki mukabla, tun bhenncho sire di rann hai, tagaddi te mutiyaar. Bund dekhi hai apani, kiddan lichkaare maardi jaandi.

"Haaye, tussi o aiddan di karti." Oh thalle peyi apani bund upan nu chakadi boli te mera louda usade andar tilakda hoya khub geya. Usadi fudi hajje bhi kaafi tight si, par saade gallan karan naal kaafi gilli hoyi peyi si. Es karke lun andar jaan ch koi khaas rukawat nahi hoyi, par jiddan jidan lun andar ja reha si, uddan udan usda muh khulda ja reha si. Te eh scene dekh ke mainu hamesha hi bahut josh chadd janda si.

"Lai main ki kitta?" main usanu cheddadeyan boleya.

"Lai hor tussi ni kita, tan ki gwaandiyan ne kita?" oh bol tan geyi, par fer ikk damm sharma jehi geyi. Shayad hawas iddan di chaddi si usade upar, ki usnu khud nu nahi si pta ki or ki bol rehi si.

"Kya hi pta, main tan itthey kaam karda mar jaanda, pta nu utthey pind ch kisdi aish ho rehi hai." main usanu ghasse maarde ne keha.

"Haaye, kidan diyan gallan kar rahe ho?" oh boli, par usadi awaaj ch koi gussa nahi si, bas hawas hi hawas lag rehi si, te main note kita ki osde mume bikul tikhe khadde si.

"Main kehda galat keh reha han. Saare pind ch ga peya hoya hai, ki bhncho eh nma maal tan nirra agg hai agg". Main ghasseyan di speed wadandeya keha.
"Haaye, sacchin" oh tadafdi hoyi boli.

"Hor nee tan, menu tan lagda, ki saare mard utthey apani gharwaaliyan nu chodade hye, tere baare ch hi sochade honne" ghasseyan di speed es bele bilkul charam te si.

"Haaye" oh hunn apanni bund chuk chuk ke aaap bhi ghasse maar rehi si, te mere sir deyan ballan ch jor jor ke hatth ghumma reha si.

Te saare chadde, tere chutddan de baare ch sochadeyan, mutth maarde honne te sochde honne ki ek baar kite kalli mil jaave, te bas swargan de njaare aa jann.

Bas innan aakhade hi main aakhari ghassa mareya te apna paani chadd ditta. Usane menu ghuttt ke jffi paa leyi, te ikk damm dhili pe gayi.
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(20-07-2019, 07:37 PM)manpreetaj Wrote:  bahut vadia ... pr regular rehna je story start krni ae kyuki ithe half hi ne sarian stories

Thanks a lot brother..I will try my best to provide updates ASAP.....
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(20-07-2019, 09:35 PM)Dhana amli Wrote:  Veryy nice ...regular update dinda rahi veer

Thanks Veer. Will try to provide updates ASAP...
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(20-07-2019, 10:32 PM)Hello523 Wrote:  Good start

Thanks Bro..
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(20-07-2019, 10:47 PM)Boss70 Wrote:  Bohot vadia ji ..

Thanks bro...
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#7

(21-07-2019, 08:42 PM)Tera_happy Wrote:  Att babe

thanks a lot Veer....
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(22-07-2019, 02:30 PM)Tera_happy Wrote:  Tu 22 pehli nhi puri kiti j eh v vich shadhni a tah huni krde band nhi bahd ch ahme lok umeeda lah lehnde te tuc bhaj jane o

I know 22, par main bahut jyada busy ho gya si, te plot sochann da time nahi lag reha si. Baaki meri try har rehandi hai, ki har update da end aisa ho ki banda full enjoy kar sake. So its like each update in itself is a story.

Baaki mai try karanga jyada ton jyada update karan di, but mera week kaafi busy rehanda hai....

Baaki readers de response te bhi kaafi kuchh depend karda hai...
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(22-07-2019, 07:10 PM)Captian Wrote:  Nice start

Thanks bro....
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(22-07-2019, 03:28 PM)jattwaad22 Wrote:  supeb

Thanks Veer...
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(22-07-2019, 10:43 PM)Vickramjeet Wrote:  Bai update kado auga

Abhi time lag jaayega yaar. I have just created a draft and need to finalize it. Will try by tomorrow late night, but can't promise..

Please bear with me..
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(23-07-2019, 09:21 AM)doonknightz Wrote:  bahut sohne.....nice start dear.......sohna likhde ho....tuhanu pta story kive create kri d hai......loved ur style of writing......shayad mai pahla v tuhadi story padi hai...u r an amazing writer.....enni wadiya punjabi story likhan wale ghatt hi ne.....u r doing a great job......
thank u for sharing this story....
keep going
keep writing

Thanks a lot brother for such detailed comment and appreciation. I remember that you have appreciated my previous story as well, so thanks a lot for that as well.
 Its comment like these only that encourage writer to go further. I will try to provide updated as soon as possible....
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#13

Shaam da vela...

Jaggi apane ek dost naal khadda gappan ladda reha si. Udon gallan karde-karde una da dhyaan udron ondiyan 2 jananiyan te peya, jo ki holi holi uhnan di side hi aa rehiyan si.
Waisey uthey kayi families sair kar rehiyan si, par uhnan cho jyadatar jananiyan hi seegiyan jehdiyan ki shaam de mousam da luft utha rehyan si te kayi apane bacheyan naal park ch baithiyan si. 
Jaggi uhnan cho ek janani nu changi tarah jaanda si, par usade naal aa rehi mutiyaar tan alag hi duniya di si. Uchha lamba kadd, nasheeliyan kajjal naal bhariyan akhan, te tikha nakk kehar dha reha si. Te thalle paaya punjabi suite, jo ki poora fit si, jis ch chaldi de mumme upar thalle ho rahe si. Jaggi tan bas kho hi geya si uhnu dekhda dekhda. Jaddon hi oh dohe agge langiyan pichhon os mutiyaar nu dekh ke Jaggi hil hi geya. Usdi turadi jaandi di bund de hilaareyan ne Jaggi de lunn nu sotthe wang sakht karta si. Oh uddon takk usanu dekhda reha jaddon tak ki oh akhan to aujhal nahi ho geiyan. Te Jaggi de naal khada usada dost Guri usanu jhatka dinda kehanda, "kiddan bhai, tu tan baala hi mast ho geya?"

Jaggi "Yaar eh kehadi item aa geyi ithey, pehlan tan kaddi nahi dekhi?".
"Han yaar, gall tan teri sehi hai, eh tan bhenchod agg hai agg. Pta karna penna ehde baare ch" Guri swaad lenda boleya.

Udhar jaddon Reet te Kavi society ch sair karde karde, gate de kollon langiyan tan security guards tan uhnan nu dekhde hi reh gaye. Te uhnan cho ek guard dooje guard nu, jo ki bharame shareer da hunda hai, jisda naam Banta (jo ki uhnan da head si), monda maarde kehanda, "Ustaad ji, oh dekho aaj tan society ch kehar pe reha".

"Ki, kehanda oye, kehda kehar." te us paase nu nazar maarda hai jidhar nu oh guard dekh reha hunda.

"Oh teri behandi, aah kon hai yaar. Nma hi maal aaya lagda" Banta kehanda.

"Thuhade jugaad naal hi ghum reha, puchh lo uston" uhnan cho ek security guard usnu kabolda.

Banta uhnu ghorda hoya bolda "Bhendeya-yaara kinni baar keha ki eh gall muh ton na kaddin. Jeh kise nu pta lagg geya tan saaleya saddi saareyan di chhutti ho jaanni itthon.".

Khairghumade-ghumade oh jaddon thak geiyan, tan Kavi kehandi "Aunty main tan thak geyi aan, chalo wapis chaliye".

Reet kehandi "chal theek hai. Par jaande jaande kuchh samaan le chalde aan dukan ton". Te fer dono janiyan lak matkandiyan karyaane wali dukaan wal nu chal peiyan. Eh dukaan da maalik si "Chhinda" jehda ki kaafi meesanna jeha banda si, jiddan ki jyadatar dukaandaar hunde hi ne.

Do kainth punjabannan nu dekh ke oh age hunda hoya Reet nu bolda "Aao behanji, badde dinnan baad chakkar maareya. Hor sab theek thaak tan hai na?" 

"Theek hai bhaaji, bas koyi samaan di lodd hi nahi peyi, ehi saare saaman le jaande seege lodd penn te" Ret ne jawab ditta.

Fer Banta Kavi wal dekhda kehanda "Aah madam nu pehali baar dekheya. Thuhadde rishtedaar lagade".

"Oh sadde naal waale flat ch nme kiraayedaar aaye si na, uhnan di gharwali hai. Huni huni aayi hai ithey" Reet ne jawaab ditta.

Kavi ne usnu SSA bulayi, te Banta bhi agge hunda usnu ghoorda hoya SSA da jawab dinda hai.

Reet ne kuchh samaan pack karwaya, te Kavi nu puchheya, "Tun tani lenna kuchh?"

"Nahi filhaal tan koyi dimaag ch nahi aa reha." Kavi kehandi.

Eh sunn Banta kehanda "Koyi na ji, jaddon chete aave, tan saanu phone kar lena, ghar fda jamange, iddan di kehaddi gall hai".

Kavi kehandi, "Ji jaroor" te dodo janniyan utthon nikall jaandiyan. Te Banta uhnan nu jaandiyan nu dekhda rehanda te apanne lunn te hath fern lag janda hai.
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(24-07-2019, 10:50 AM)thereald Wrote:  Great story. love the theme. waiting for more...

Thanks a lot brother for appreciating the story....
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(25-07-2019, 04:24 PM)Tera_happy Wrote:  22 att

Thanks Bro....
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(26-07-2019, 07:43 PM)manpreetaj Wrote:  bahut vadia ... bs regular rehna

Thanks Veer...Will try but depends on time and Reader's response. (I am short on time and Reader's response has not been that encouraging)
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(27-07-2019, 06:44 AM)Tera_happy Wrote:  Gya kidr nu

Thoda busy chal reha yaar.....
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(28-07-2019, 11:00 AM)jattwaad22 Wrote:  nyc bai

Thanks Brother...
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"Hanji, kidddan reha fer ajj da din?" Main Kavi de uppar aaunde puchheya.

"Han theek hi si, Kuchh khaas nahi, bore hi hoyyi". usne aggon jawaab ditta.

"Lai bore honn waali kehdi gall hai. Reet aunty koll chale jaana si" main usade muh te apanne bull ferdeyan keha.

"Jyada jaande bhi theek nahi lagda. Bas shaam nu sair karan de time geyi si uhnan naall" usane menu jaffi paunde keha.

"Haaye, fer tan society ch kehar hi pai geya honna ajj" main usade mummeyan nu ghuttdeyan keha.

"Ahhhh, ki kehi jaanne o" ohne kasmasandi ne keha. "Kahda keharr?".

Main usade mummeyan di mori nu hattan ch ghuttke khicheya te aakheya "Inniyan kainth runnan chakkar laa rehiyan honn, te keharr tan pauga hi".

"Hayyyeeeee, holli karo na please" oh idhar udhar sirr maardi kehandi.

"Dass na, peya kehar ki nahi?" mai dobara pucheya.

"Menu ni pta?" unhe aggon jawaab ditta.

Main usada dujja choocha bhi apanni ungalan ch fadd leya, te fer aakheya "dassde chheti".

"Haaye. haan peya si. chhaddo hunn tan please" usane apanne lakk nu upar thalle kardeyan keha.

"Achha, ki kehar peya?" main poora mumma hath ch fadleya te usade muh te chummiyan lende ne puchheya,

"Hayye, please...meton ni bol hunda?" ohne machaldi ne keha.

Menu usade taras jeha aa geya. Main apanna lunn jehda ki poori tarah khadd geya si, usadi fuddi de chhedd te ferde ne keha "Lunn khadde kite ki nahi thalle ghumaddi ne?"

"Ohhh. ohhh", usane apani bund chukk ke mera lunn andar lendi koshish karani start kar ti.

Main thoda aap hi pichhe hunde ne keha "Dass na, kitte lunn khadde ki nahi?"

Oh iss bele nilkul hawas ch dubb chukki si te apanni bund chuk di ne keha "Han keette". 
Main usade muh wal dekheya tan ppaya ki usadiyan akhan bilkul band seegiya, te usada thalle walla bull usane danda wich leya hoya si, te usada tikkha nakk jischon oh jor jor naal sah le rahi si, oh kadde fullda te band ho reha si. Mumme bilkul siddhe khadde si, te chuchiyan 1-1 inch tanniyan peiyan si. Mera tan lunn usadi eh halat dekh ke hi chuttann de kagaar te aageya si.

Main ik damm lun usadi fuddi ch dhakkeya te oh bilkul aaraam naal andar baddada challa geya, kyunki usadi fudi bilkul paanni naal tar hoyi peyi si. 

"Achha kisade kisade lunn khadde kitte?" main pehala ghassa maardeyan puchheya.

"ufffff, haaye saareyan de karte, haaye har dekhann walle da kadda si" uhne akhan band ch hi keha.

"Kiddan khadde kite?" main ghasseyan di speed wadandeyan puchheya.

"Haaye, lakk matka matka ke keete" uhne jawaab ditta.

Hajje thodda hi time hoya si unhu chodade nu, par main nikallann di kagaar te seega bilkul. Main aggon puchheya "Lakk ki bund matka ke".

"Haaye, bund matka matka ke. Thuhaddi jaan di bund ne poori society de lunn khadde karwaate ajj, haaye" uhane apanne aap bund chuk chuk ke ghasse maardi ne keha...te kuchh hi deir ch ek damm nidhal ho ke digg peyi, Mera bhi saaraa da saara paani nichodd ditta si uhane......
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(01-08-2019, 01:49 PM)Jambojatt Wrote:  NYC...... Keep it up

Thanks brother...
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