17-01-2019, 07:00 PM
Quote:Masoom Shahzada
Waah bhaai waah kyaa shaandaar update diya hai.
Raaj asal me ek dragon, waah aapke dimaag ka to kahna hi nahi hai.
Riya to hairat ki lahro me dabkar saans lena hi bhool gayi hogi.
Bahut mazaa aayaa aapke es update ko parkar.
Bahut achchaa likh rahe ho aap.
Bas ek baat jo kahani me atpati lagti hai wo hai, eske kirdaaro ki language warna sab baate bahut achchee hai.
Aap soch bahut achchaa raheN hai, bas kirdaaro ke dialogs pe bhi thora sa dhayaan de.
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Aur haaN plz buraa mat maanna jaisa mujhe lagaa waise maine kah diya.
Waise mujhe kahani likhne ke baare me kuch ataa pataa to hai nahi,shayad esiliye liye mujhe kuch aesa lagaa ho.
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A/w update jabardast hai...