18-10-2019, 06:40 PM
Quote:kitte_po
I like the 2nd -- definitely not the 3rd as I am not a fan ofbang story -- your story so far had consensual element (by all parties)-- They also had a manipulative element, which is okay. 1st one seems to be 50 shades of grey kinda thing
Quote:prashant4every
story is really good,, Lekin agar bangdal diya story me to sirf rapiest hi padenge,, baki sab story chhod denge,, kyuki jo rapiest nahi he wo bang-story ko imaging bhi nahi kar sakte.. aur story me se intrest bhi ud jata hai...
indodesiboy
No bro it was entirely different concept teenage girl is made into personal mistress (keep) by a business man and he also shared her with his clients, business partners, other officials for his profit
Quote:Originally Posted by kolarhotguys
Wonderful story dude.. I am reading this story every night.
Inspiring from your story thread i decided to write a story.
To say simply..
FUCKING AWESOME.
please add some pics if possible.
indodesiboy
Thank you so much for your comments...... I am writing this story from the inspiration of other good writers in the same exbii.... and i am glad that i inspired you.... start writing..... peoples in this website will surely encourage and appreciate your work........ all the best