25-09-2019, 06:04 PM
(25-09-2019, 05:23 PM)amudha Wrote: In the original story devi is not wife but servant. I made it wife here. I wrote another story for threesome. I wll check it
Yes, and I liked your story line better. It adds more intrigue. (I imagine what happens when Devi (wife) finds out.. will all live together - if so same place or different place)
Thank you for looking into this.