Fantasy அவன், அவள், புருஷன் (Completed - நிறைவு)

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Thanks to everyone for their comments. Just to let all of you know that lately I am pressed for time and therefore some errors are creeping in. For example I had stated Mohan is getting promotion to Senior Manager when I had earlier stated he already was one. Since this story started about 6 months ago I have lost track on some minor events. In an earlier update I had to bring in Girja's husband in the episode but I had forgotten the name I had given him in the story. So I had to go back and check from earlier sections on this and that took time. Now I don't have that luxury anymore. So I didn't take time to check what I had written earlier. It was always in the back of my mind that I had stated he was a Manager before. If I had to go back and check all areas it would effect the time taken to write an episode. As long as these minor issues don't affect the main story in any way I am alright with that.

 Hence please understand my situation. I am trying to keep the main gist of the story as relevant and logical as can be keeping in mind that this is a fantasy story. There are no persons such as Vikram, Bavani, Mohan, Sumiththa etc as depicted in this story in real life.

As another minor point raised by one of the ardent readers that with Sumiththa being in the house how can he be returning to an empty house. I was referencing to Mohan's state of mind. Without his loved ones of Bavani and Avinash the house was an empty one for him figuratively. The main theme of this story is the progression of the relationship between Vikram and Bavani hence the story mostly revolves round them. As the story reaches it's climax it would probably answer some of the questions raised. I am not able to reply on some of the queries raised as it would impact the story further down. The 'Tour' episodes would be somewhat lengthy and probably take 3 to 4 updates or even more. It would lead to a different?/further? understanding between them. 

I value your comments. Please be patient on further development of the story. Thank you,