Fantasy அவன், அவள், புருஷன் (Completed - நிறைவு)

[Karthik Ramarajan]

This is hot story and no doubt about it. Only thing that i dint like in this story is characterization of vikram. He is projected like an avatar born to fuck the married women. He is staying alone in the house opposite girija and working in a big multinational IT company. Is that his own house or rented it for his work. He can be a dominating alpha or whatever. Many readers had asked whether he does not have any family, siblings, etc. or he is an orphan. The author did not care to answer to those questions in specific.
For short stories, people do not care to know about the background of the characters much. This being a long story and its over 5 months since it started, there is no clarity on the main character yet is something very bad.
While reading the story, i used to think what made this man target these ladies. Does he have a bad childhood or did any lady abused him when he was a child or his mother gave birth to him to a person other than his father etc.
Secondly, the author did not say about the breakup of bavani love. Whether she was more possessive while in love or her lover was. What made her marry mohan. Did she feel bad about her decision after her marriage. Whether bhavani is a virgin when she married mohan or she had already fucked with her boyfriend many times during her college days etc.
It is good to have these information covered as part of the narrative in between. Not necessarily only the sex scenes needed. This throws more light on the characters behavioral. If these questions are answered, it will be really nice and the story will be more complete one. hope the readers also agree.