18-09-2019, 07:52 PM
yah kahaani vaastav mein bahut hee kaamuk hai. lekin agar aapne yah kahaani hindi mein likhee hai to yah adhik kaamuk hone chahie.aapki lekhan shaile aur kaushal asaadhaaran hain.main aapse anurodh karata hoon, krpaya ek aur interfaih vayask kahaani shuroo karen jisamen ek nimn varg ka vyakti jo vipareet dharm ke prati vishvaas rakhata hai, ek ameer parivaar kee roodhivaadee aur pyaar karane vaalee grhinee ko aakarshit karega aur vah unhen bahut mushkil se chodenge.