16-09-2019, 12:26 PM
(15-09-2019, 07:46 PM)Vishal Ramana Wrote: here are some more gaps i noticed.
1. vikram is shown like orphan with no family background.
2. Sumitha past love life is not important, but bhavani past is important and need some explanation on why she break up with her boyfriend. May be bhavani has a liking towards cock that is not black in color. unfortunately her husband and lover did not have that. :D
3. Why vikram did not ask anything about bhavani sister. Being a bachelor and womaniser, He should have expressed his interest to know how beautiful she is?
(15-09-2019, 08:39 PM)Sakshi Priyan Wrote: Authors style of writing is really good. It is also important to give a brief family/official/social background about the pratagonists. You cannot leave everything to the imagination of the readers
@game40it,
Cant agree more. Please give some details on this.