13-09-2019, 06:49 PM
Keep going on... The build up is gaining momentum but as a suggestion, what makes erotica great for me is the depravity of the situation, please try to create more erotic situations like the one in some early updates involving Dattu banging Tanvi from behind a locked gate. You seem to be gifted to narrate such situations, so please consider this suggestion while you write future updates.