10-09-2019, 01:23 PM
We have seen enough love making sequences bro. I understand that this is a sex story. But, Please try to add something interesting in between to make it engaging to read. may be a to and fro about what sumitha and mohan thinking at this point.
You can still create doubt in the mind of mohan or some cuck thoughts that might trying to invade his mind and make the scenarios against him to believe it etc. Otherwise, till bhavani gets pregnant, you have to write the same scene of love making in kovai, ladies tour etc.
You can still create doubt in the mind of mohan or some cuck thoughts that might trying to invade his mind and make the scenarios against him to believe it etc. Otherwise, till bhavani gets pregnant, you have to write the same scene of love making in kovai, ladies tour etc.