Adultery Fervor Regained by pinuram-Completed
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Review: Fervor Regained


I am not really good at writing reviews, and I am in a dilemma where to begin as I am totally mesmerized by this wonderful piece. Pinu da is a senior writer, and there is so much maturity in his writing. FJB told me that pinu da's stories are really good, if I could be patient enough to feel the slow sensual flow of it. Really, this story is so different from the ones I usually read, and I just loved how it feels.

I have a personal liking for stories of darker shades. But this story beautifully weaves every shade, every emotion of life, be it joy, sorrow, anger, jealousy, love, pain, sacrifice, betrayal...I can say there isn't one human emotion left untouched. Such realistic portrayal of events, amazing characterization...everything smooth and controlled, no where will you find undue exaggeration or overt dramatization.

All the characters were perfect, and they fit just right in their places. We have a loving Ambalika who makes a great sacrifice for her brother, and even later tries to see to it that everyone is happy, presenting an example of unparalleled love.

The character I could connect the most with was Rishu. I don't know why they say opposites attract, I have always been attracted towards people who are like me. There was something about Rishu that makes me feel connected with him, perhaps it was his calm nature, his honesty, his dedication towards his profession, his sense of responsibility and yes, the much unforgettable impulsive and sadistic trait which surfaces towards the end that had an immense impact over me. I believe every human being has an angel and a devil within them and the balance between the two is very delicate. It is only love that has the power to weigh more on the positive side. When love vanishes, the balance trips and the devil appears.

Jhinuk was fine but I couldn't really connect with her. Not that she was a bad wife, but may be just because I am of a totally opposite nature. She does a wonderful job of being by Rishu's side all the time, even when that storm hits her on her birthday. She shows immense maturity by keeping the disturbing issue to herself. Jhinuk's love kept the balance I was just talking about. Had she not been so wise and understanding, the loving Rishu would have been lost forever.

The chemistry between Rishu and Jhinuk is remarkable, something I have never read before. Since they get married under such stressful conditions, there is so much tension between. It is a bliss to watch the ice melt, and how Jhinuk slowly starts craving for his touch and physical and emotional proximity....how a calm natured Rishu tries to be protective about his energetic vibrant wife, and how she respects him every time he objects to something.

The story totally does justice to its theme. Now when I sit back and think about the time I was following this story update by update...how beautifully it evolves from the premarital heartbreak to a wonderful marital bonding. It shows how insignificant the sorrows of the past can be if you have a loving partner who will be there with you through the sunshine and then rain.

Great job pinu da! Thanks for this wonderful story! If I find time, I will read your other stories and review them as well.
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RE: Fervor Regained by pinuram - by Ramesh_Rocky - 08-01-2019, 11:56 AM
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