Story Of Gayu

[preethi15]

Nice story preethi15.

You know what? If you add a bit of dialogues between the characters,  it would change the entire overlook of this story. Try if you can and if you have enough time.

Also, it seems readers like stories with pics added to it. There are rave reviews and comments for such stories here. However, loved this work...pic or no pic, imagination is the best creative director!

Pls continue your good work. Awesome work!

Thank you Aavesh for your comments....   Yes you are corrrect . I can add a bit more of dialogues from characters but i i add it will become a long boring story for the readers..... 

I cannot add pics because i am typing this story from home and when i am typing my mom thinks i am doing some work  and if i browse some pictures and add means my mom will easily find out.... So readers i am sorry i cannot add pics.....   

Anyways thank you for your suggestions....i will try to improve