01-09-2019, 10:34 PM
Nice story preethi15.
You know what? If you add a bit of dialogues between the characters, it would change the entire overlook of this story. Try if you can and if you have enough time.
Also, it seems readers like stories with pics added to it. There are rave reviews and comments for such stories here. However, loved this work...pic or no pic, imagination is the best creative director!
Pls continue your good work. Awesome work!
You know what? If you add a bit of dialogues between the characters, it would change the entire overlook of this story. Try if you can and if you have enough time.
Also, it seems readers like stories with pics added to it. There are rave reviews and comments for such stories here. However, loved this work...pic or no pic, imagination is the best creative director!
Pls continue your good work. Awesome work!