01-09-2019, 01:27 AM
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(31-08-2019, 01:46 PM)Bhikhumumbai Wrote: Oh No.... Where Ware You Bring This Story...??? I dident think Rider Appreciate This Idea... The Sluty rich Bitch Used By ( Sp Lower class People) is lso Ok. But In brothel I Think it's Lost Charm of Story.
Hiii...Thank you soo much for this feedback...
Please note, we had initially given the background set up of the main characters...Now, we are dwelling a bit in detail on each of their ulterior motives...We have not fallen to the category of succumbing Tanvi into a characterless person...She is a wife, mother and a career woman...not someone with less intellect to take meaningless actions...kindly be patient for the upcoming chapters to know more...