31-08-2019, 07:36 PM
Hot and erotic story. Beautifully written.
Only thing i found missing is the expressions/moaning of the protagonists during the love making that a sex story usually will have. I saw this in very few places. This will add more sensuality and make the story happening real hot while reading.
Only thing i found missing is the expressions/moaning of the protagonists during the love making that a sex story usually will have. I saw this in very few places. This will add more sensuality and make the story happening real hot while reading.