A wedding ceremony in village

[Khiladi007]

Firstly thanks for the compliment about my brain. And almighty give u also writing power i see ur bengali story of seven page but cant say u r making fool of ur readers or not becoze i dont know bengali.

Now the flashback u r talking about,  i not started it yet. This update is not a flashback. Its just a normal update if u think its a flashback its up u. Falshback means Abhay past story of his killing not means this. And when that story comes all other story paused becoz  Abhay story is from different time era. Thats the reason to make it seperate from other stories and take it to last day. Thats why i take this update to day 6 rather than day 5.

If now u understand what i am saying than its ok otherwise i also think its a waste of time to tell you anything. Becoz before this u commented on this thread on 21dec2018 and 1 may 2019 and both the times u only commenting on to leave that story what i already written on xossip becoz u already read that on xossip. But my thinking is differ becoz here are so many readers who first time join my story on xossipy thats why acc to me give them a short briefing is important. I cant take decison according  to just one reader.

And prasing line what u r talking about firstly check u never ever gave any prasing comment on this thread. Only said two times to start the story where i leave on xossip. So dont say anything about prasing u never comment on shabana u never comment on neha u never comment on vineeta or garima but when i gave a update from xossip u critisizing it.

And jo baat tumne readers par kahi ki we readers dont have anything to say unless prasing me. To for ur kind information maine apne readers ke feedback ko behad seriously liya jeetu aur lalu ke updates uske example hai. But jo tum chahte he wo feedback nahi tha ek personal demand thi ki xossip par story jaha chhodi thi wo chhodo a yaha uske aage se likho kyuki tum wo pad chuke ho. Par jo yaha pehli baar pad rahe hai kya wo readers nahi hai kya mai wo updates unke liye post nahi kar sakta hu. Agar mai ek readers ki demand par wo story chhod du to kya ye unhe fool banana nahi hoga.

And in the last u are talking about two years than i told u yaha maine Dec 18 se likhna shuru kara hai aur 8 months me 100 page tak aa gaya hu. If u think u can write faster than write a story faster. Writer also have a personal life wo har waqt story hi nahi likhta rahega.

Aur rahi pasing ki baat to writer apne khud ke liye story nahi likhta hai readers ke liye likhta hai. Aur maine nahi kaha kisiko ko sirf mujhe prasie kro hamesha ye kaha ki comment karo aur har reader ke comment ka usiki bhasha me jawab bhi diya. Tumhare bhi har comment ka jawab diya hai. Agar readers ne kuchh changement ki request kari to pura bana banaya update delete karke unke hisab se upate bhi banaya.

I think maine tumhe achhe se khulkar samjha diya hai aur rahi xossip ki story ki baat to ha mai wo neetu wala update bhi dalunga kyuki wo ek imp update tha jise maine rok kar rakha tha. Agar waha bhi tun fool bano to tum use bina pade paas it away kar dena.

Wow as if I don't know what is flashback !!Thank you very much for teaching me flashback. You are misinterpreting. In xossip posting this Aarti update you said the story would go long back, probably you have the same intention here as well. I meant that..

Readers demanded to delay that flashback update one day, they wanted some more update of others before driving into the flashback. Wanted to see Neetu's way of seduction. Aarti and Neetu's story stack where as it is. In my words that is making fool of people. You may say that you didn't write these parts here so new readers have no problem they are finding a new update. What you are saying is technically correct but as per I understand this should not be the way, Aarti's this update should be the part of earlier night and in your "story in brief" and a new update at day 6 both for Aarti and Neetu. Probably you have some other ideas.

I didn't demand anything, I believe writers have own idea and want to know their idea first. I just had asked you a question with my personal opinion. There was no 'personal demand ' just 'personal opinion'.

After an average update when you come to say "I will not go with this story any more, you are not commenting", on that time readers have no option but praise you. If they say update is "disgusting" you will not continue the story for sure. There are seven different stories everyone has his favorite story, he will not comment for any average update of others. After a fantastic update readers automatically comment.

I'm not talking about your speed of writing, you are giving 1 or 2 quite big update each week, that is completely ok. I was talking about Aarti  - Neetu story which still don't have that much pace as others.

You may have a different idea about the story than xossip, when I asked the question you can say that about having some different view, different Idea. No objection for that.So far we all know, whenever you improvise that turns out super great. But you started talking about my sense. Its very obvious that it is not so easy to listen our criticize, neither you nor me.

Whatever we has told us has told, now finish it off here. As a writer you are fantastic, no one can not but fan of your writings. Keep going and entertain all the readers, wish you good luck.