A wedding ceremony in village

Poll: 7 Female charectar and 7 dufferent stories which u like the most You do not have permission to vote in this poll.
Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA	15.53%	93	15.53%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION	18.53%	111	18.53%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED	34.06%	204	34.06%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY	10.85%	65	10.85%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE	6.01%	36	6.01%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE	5.68%	34	5.68%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION	9.35%	56	9.35%
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A wedding ceremony in village

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23-08-2019, 07:15 PM

(23-08-2019, 03:04 PM)Ajay.star Wrote: Bhai ab tum story apne hisab se nahi likh rahe ho is liye padhne me jiyada maja nahi araha, xossip site pe jise khud ki marji se likhte the vese nahi likh rahe ho.

Hum tumhari writing skill aur tumhare vicharo vali story padhne aate he, na ki kisi Reader ki suggestion vali story. Ager kisi Reader ko bahut echa ho ki ye story uske vichar ke hisab chale to unse gujaris he ki vo khud story likhe. Ager unki story pasand aayi to jarur padhuga, lekin kisi ki achi khasi story vat mat lagavo.

Logon bhai tumne jo story me do changes kiye vo pasand nahi aaye. Ek to garima aur chhotu ki story reader ke hisab se likhi and lalu ka character acha bana diya.

I hope tumhari story pehle ki tarha sab se different hi rahe.

Oh bhai bade dino baad tumhara comment aya maine to samjha ki jin do readers ko maine apni story ka part banaya wo dono hi alag ho gae. Abhay raichand ka to koi ata pata nahi hai. Bhai mai reader ka hisab bhi dekh raha hu aur apna hisab bhi. Aur pichhle do update shabana aur neha ke to logo ne bahut pasand kare unme tumhe maza nahi aya.

Bhai mai story to puri apne dimag me pehle hi likh chuka hu ga reader agar kuchh demand karte hai to hske hisab se halka fulka change kar deta hu.

Ab jaise do changes ki baat kari ek jeetu wala waha tumne chhotu likha wo koi bahut bada change nahi hai wo kewal ek scene tha jaha maine sex socha tha reader ne mana kara to orgasm scene bana diya par kirdaar kahi nahi gae garima bhi wahi hai jeetu bhi. Balki hariya aur garima ka bhi pehle orgasm hua tha phir sex wahi yaha ho jaega. So wo koi itni badi baat nahi thi.

And doosra lalu ka charectar bhai to tumne to story xosip se padi hai aur Lalu ko bhi achhe se jante ho. Aur agar us update ki ye line tum dhyan se pado to is baat ka jawab Lalu ne khud de diya tha.

Lalu: Kya soch rahi hai ki kahi mai tujhe koi galat goli to nahi khila raha ye soch rahi hai. Zeher to dunga nahi tujhe maar kar mujhe kya mil jaega aur anshe ki goli khilakar tere sath kuchh karnenki mujhe zarurat nahi kyuki ye tu bhi janti hai ki agar mai chahu to tere hosho hawaas me bhi tere sath teri marzi ke bina bhi kuchh bhi kar sakta hu aur ye tune kal raat hi dekh liya tha to tujhe nashe ki goli kyu khilaunga. WO TO STORY KE KUCHH DARIYADIL READERS KO TERI BARBAAD HALAT PAR KUCHH JADA HI TARAS AA GAYA AUR UNHONE WRITER SE REQUEST KARI KI TUJHE AUR ZALEEL NA KARA JAE AUR APNA WRITER BHI PIGHAL GAYA AUR APUN KA STYLE HI BADAL KAR RAKH DALA. Par agar mera ye badla hua roop samajh nahi aa raha hai to wapas kal raat wala lalu bhi ban sakta hu.

So mujh par nahi to Lalu par bharosa rakho wo utna bhi seedha nahi jitna dikh raha hai bus kum shabdo me jada samjho. Lalu is the most Disgusting Charectar of this story. Ye bhi uska bus ek naya shade hai.