22-08-2019, 09:54 AM
bahut sohne KAVI ma'am.....new twist..just amazing.....maza aa gya SUKHJEET & MANPREET di friendship......dowe stories merge ho gayia is naal.....AWESOME
ek taah tussi enna wadiya likhde ho....slow seduction....bahut hi jyada erotic scene create karde ho.....swaad aa janda pad ke.... i like the way of ur writing....
' O teri bhain nu '......eh wala dialogue.....i loved it........matlab conversation taah sira hi la dinde ho......
ma'am tuhade update d hi udeek kari d hai.....keep coming back ma'am....we r waiting for u always.......
keep going KAVI ma'am
keep writing
ek taah tussi enna wadiya likhde ho....slow seduction....bahut hi jyada erotic scene create karde ho.....swaad aa janda pad ke.... i like the way of ur writing....
' O teri bhain nu '......eh wala dialogue.....i loved it........matlab conversation taah sira hi la dinde ho......
ma'am tuhade update d hi udeek kari d hai.....keep coming back ma'am....we r waiting for u always.......
keep going KAVI ma'am
keep writing