21-08-2019, 04:42 AM
haha I can't wait. It is 4:30AM and I'm still reading. You can see how much I'm enjoying but I came here to say I'm very very disappointed with chapter 33(called anvita) on page number 34. When you create a virtual world and set the rules of your virtual world, you should not break those rules, else the story would stop making sense. In this virtual world created by Krish, one of the rule is that Atul is a very handsome and very intelligent person who can seduce anyone and he is neither a cuck nor a stupid person, and certainly doesn't like it if someone tries to fuck his wife(we are provided many examples for that).
In chapter 32, we see that he knows that varun is kissing anvita on the top of the terrace and that he just adjusted himself between her legs and then we see that atul is watching this and is very very angry and sad. But then in the chapter 33, when atul confronts them, they cook up some story and he believes them. I don't understand why he believes them when he knows the they were screwing each other. He isn't the same atul we saw when he busted varun and her gf having sex in the car thinking it was anvia. I wanted confrontation between them and but instead he made love to her when they got home. It is unbelievable and I feel cheated since the author had been teasing about anvia getting caught since a long time. I feel let down. I hope I will find an answer to this in the next chapters. And how come that atul never tries to improve his performance in bed even after getting so many hints that it would ruin his marriage if he doesn't improve. And I would have loved to know what anvita was thinking before going on a night date with her hubby's boss or when inviting her student to her house when he hubby was on a trip, I know there are some explanations in one sentences but I wasn't satisfied with them, it looked out of character for her and I really wanted to know what went through her head when making those decisions.
In chapter 32, we see that he knows that varun is kissing anvita on the top of the terrace and that he just adjusted himself between her legs and then we see that atul is watching this and is very very angry and sad. But then in the chapter 33, when atul confronts them, they cook up some story and he believes them. I don't understand why he believes them when he knows the they were screwing each other. He isn't the same atul we saw when he busted varun and her gf having sex in the car thinking it was anvia. I wanted confrontation between them and but instead he made love to her when they got home. It is unbelievable and I feel cheated since the author had been teasing about anvia getting caught since a long time. I feel let down. I hope I will find an answer to this in the next chapters. And how come that atul never tries to improve his performance in bed even after getting so many hints that it would ruin his marriage if he doesn't improve. And I would have loved to know what anvita was thinking before going on a night date with her hubby's boss or when inviting her student to her house when he hubby was on a trip, I know there are some explanations in one sentences but I wasn't satisfied with them, it looked out of character for her and I really wanted to know what went through her head when making those decisions.