A wedding ceremony in village

Poll: 7 Female charectar and 7 dufferent stories which u like the most You do not have permission to vote in this poll.
Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA	15.53%	93	15.53%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION	18.53%	111	18.53%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED	34.06%	204	34.06%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY	10.85%	65	10.85%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE	6.01%	36	6.01%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE	5.68%	34	5.68%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION	9.35%	56	9.35%
Total		599 vote(s)	100%

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A wedding ceremony in village

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17-08-2019, 12:00 PM

(17-08-2019, 07:08 AM)Logan555 Wrote: Bhai update ready ho chuka hai aap logo ne comment karne me thodi der kardi. Ab bane banae update ko delete rokne ka koi matlab nahi banta agar usme kuchh changement nahi karna to. Waise maine khud koshish ki hai ki mere updates repeatative na lage aur ye baat neha par bhi dhyan rakhi hai. Baki charectars ko grow hone ka samay chahjye tha Neha already grown charectar tha aur garima ne badi jaldi form pakad liya jadatar sex scene in dono ne hi diye ab tak. To ek tarah se in dono ne baki charectar ke guardians ki bhoomika ada ki unhe grow karne ka samay diya kyuki agar ye dono na hote to story ke 60% sex scene hi na hote aur tab baki kirdaaro ke sex scene banane padte.

And Neha Master Slave ka kewal ek scene hi aya to repetative kaise ho sakta hai phir bhi ye aane wala update padne ke baad apni rai jaroor dijiyega ki ye apko repetative laga ki nahi. Agar repatative laga to bata dijiyega kaha repatative laga aur na laga to take ur words back. Mai bus yahi kahunga ki neha ka update shabana ke zabardast update ke baad ana tha to aisa banana tha ki shabana ke update ke aage bahut chhota na pad jae.

Aur rahi repetative ki baat neha ka jo update aane wala hai waisa ab tak shayad xossipy me nahi aaya hoga is story me aana to door ki baat hai.

Aur baki kirdaar bhi apme apne time me zaroor aaenge philhaal neha shabana ko chhod kar aai thi to uska time tha uske baad baki ke doonga.

Logan bhai, you totally convinced me. Mera request isi liye hai ki Neha footage bahot hi zyada kha rahi hai. Isi liye doosre characters ko justice nahinn mil rahe hain. Kab tak woh characters ka track aayega agar aap Neha pe hi focus karte rahoge. Thoda balance banao. Aur sab lady characters ke erotic chapters shuru karo. You are a great writer. I am your big fan from xossip.com. You are the writer and captain of the ship.