17-08-2019, 07:08 AM
(16-08-2019, 11:53 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Logan bhai, ek request hai. Please stop updates of Neha Slave and her Master because it is over exposed boring repeatative. You have ensemble characters. Please focus on other girls too. Aghori Sex erotica waiting. Chaudhari track waiting, Shobha track waiting. ... Neha ka future men dijiye. Abhi aur characters baaki hai mere dost.
(16-08-2019, 12:20 PM)Abstar Wrote: I agree Logan bhai focus on other girls
Bhai update ready ho chuka hai aap logo ne comment karne me thodi der kardi. Ab bane banae update ko delete rokne ka koi matlab nahi banta agar usme kuchh changement nahi karna to. Waise maine khud koshish ki hai ki mere updates repeatative na lage aur ye baat neha par bhi dhyan rakhi hai. Baki charectars ko grow hone ka samay chahjye tha Neha already grown charectar tha aur garima ne badi jaldi form pakad liya jadatar sex scene in dono ne hi diye ab tak. To ek tarah se in dono ne baki charectar ke guardians ki bhoomika ada ki unhe grow karne ka samay diya kyuki agar ye dono na hote to story ke 60% sex scene hi na hote aur tab baki kirdaaro ke sex scene banane padte.
And Neha Master Slave ka kewal ek scene hi aya to repetative kaise ho sakta hai phir bhi ye aane wala update padne ke baad apni rai jaroor dijiyega ki ye apko repetative laga ki nahi. Agar repatative laga to bata dijiyega kaha repatative laga aur na laga to take ur words back. Mai bus yahi kahunga ki neha ka update shabana ke zabardast update ke baad ana tha to aisa banana tha ki shabana ke update ke aage bahut chhota na pad jae.
Aur rahi repetative ki baat neha ka jo update aane wala hai waisa ab tak shayad xossipy me nahi aaya hoga is story me aana to door ki baat hai.
Aur baki kirdaar bhi apme apne time me zaroor aaenge philhaal neha shabana ko chhod kar aai thi to uska time tha uske baad baki ke doonga.
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