08-01-2019, 04:30 PM
(08-01-2019, 03:59 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Ek tarf se dekha jaye to aapki bat me dam hai. Lekin story abhi bhi develop ho rahi hai.. Writer ne story ko alag tarike se dikhane ke liye koi alag character socha hoga jo aage jakar story me aa jayega.. Har baar naukar, driver, gardener hi sex karta rahega to iss forum me aisi bahot saari INCOMPLETE stories hai.. I think ki writer is same plot stories ko naya mod dekar is story ko kamyab aur interested banaega...
Bilkul sahi keh reh ho ap, pura forum noukar gardener driver se chudwane me lage huye hai....
Ishiliye maine "NAUKRANI" likhha, naukar nehi,...taki sex me wohi boring naukar chakar gardener ka entry na ho....ThnkU