07-08-2019, 06:35 PM
(07-08-2019, 01:54 PM)mastmast123 Wrote: KYA MAJA AATA H AISI KAHANIYO ME JISME EK BAHUT KHUBSURAT AURAT KO GANDE JAHIL MAZDUR YA BADSURAT GANDI AADATO WALE AADMI SE CHUDWANE ME, YAHI AURAT KISI SUNDAR SAF STHRE EDUCATED SMART ADMI SE BHI TO CHUDWAI JA SAKTI H. MAGAR LIKHANE WALE SICK MENTALITY WALE H . KYO KOI GANDI AURAT AUR GANTLEMAN ADMI KI KAHANI NHI LIKHTA, KHOKI YE TUMHARI MAN EGO KE KHILAF H .
ACHHA LIKHO TO ACHHA SEX BANE ,
GANDGI TUM LIKH SAKTE HO MAGAR KOI SUNDAR AURAT HAKIKAT ME ASIA KABHI NHI KAREGI CHAHE JITNA JORDAR LAND HO. TUM APNI BHADAS NIKALATE HO KYOKI KISI SUNDAR AURAT NE KABHI TAPPAD MARA HOGA YA REJECT KIYA HOGA.
PADANE WALE BHI AISE HOTE H JO BADALA LENA CHAHE H APNI NAKAMYABI KA JO EK SUNDAR AURAT SE UNKO MILI HOGI.
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY RUBBISH.
Shukraiya yaara...aapne apna kimti waqt nikala or mere story ko padha ...bt saayad aapne mere story ko thk se padha ni....mene khi pe bhi aisa to ni likha ki female character ko ganda low class aadmi thok rha hai..??? Qa mene aisa word use ki rishika ko slum area ke mazdoor ya driver watchman naukar chod rhe hai ??? Ha mene interfaith jrur likhi hai....ab aapko ye theme ni pasand to mt padhiye.....baaki logo ko paaaand aari hai to mai continue kar rha hu......