07-08-2019, 10:36 AM
(06-08-2019, 07:12 PM)Punjabi1slut Wrote: I am sorry krish u defeated the purpose of erotica. Nobody is here for the thrillzz....for that we can watch any movie...I am only criticizing for u to improve upon ur writing skills....
Some of fans of aditi want me to complete ADITI BEAUTIFUL WIFE DECEIVED....well give me sone time i might restart it...
Dear punjabi1slut
Hope some day you will read the post.
Its a crime to leave stories in incomplete and abandoned state. Further its a punishable offense to criticize others without introspection.
May God bring good sense in you to motivate and complete the story.
If I had 10% of the writing skill of what God have gifted you, I would have completed the story. I had imagined the story line, but while presenting it was a pity mess. I only could laugh at me.
So, pl pl continue and complete "Aditi beautiful wife deceived." You may not earn money, But you will be appreciated. In turn you will feel happy.