07-08-2019, 10:02 AM
Waah bahut khub janab... Kitani behtarin tarike se hum sab ka chutiya kata hai... The only character in the story I love is Ridhima aur bhai tumne usi character Ko itna neeche gira diya ki kya bolu... Anvita Ko utha ne ke liye tumne ek jo ki powerful character tha usi ki gaand maar li.... Atul to hai hi madarchod saala uska character hi tumne aese built Kiya par mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum bhi Atul ke character mein hi guys jaoge... Sab kuchh faila kar rakh diya yaar bhai tumne... Agar Ridhima ko alag hi karna tha to ye Ridhima ka decision hona chahiye tha na ki Atul chutiye ka....
I love this story very much krish but the Ridhima's pettiness... Atul and Anvita they both deserve each other hahaha..... Atul is same like Manu (the other story character)...
Agar Atul jaise chutiye na rahenge to hum sab Ko Anvita Jaisi chuddakkad aurat kaha se milegi.... Hahahahaha..... Ye ending itna unexpected hai ki saala hasi hi nahi Rukh rahi meri....
And as I said earlier "I never ever going to read your upcoming stories" now change it "I would love to read another one" but this time give updates day to day basis.
I love this story very much krish but the Ridhima's pettiness... Atul and Anvita they both deserve each other hahaha..... Atul is same like Manu (the other story character)...
Agar Atul jaise chutiye na rahenge to hum sab Ko Anvita Jaisi chuddakkad aurat kaha se milegi.... Hahahahaha..... Ye ending itna unexpected hai ki saala hasi hi nahi Rukh rahi meri....
And as I said earlier "I never ever going to read your upcoming stories" now change it "I would love to read another one" but this time give updates day to day basis.