07-01-2019, 11:12 AM
Quote:breville1
I don't think he enjoyed as he thought he would....he had to live up to his promise to allow her to enjoy the old man, though it hurt him...and he never got to watch them!!! Wasn't his fantasy to watch?? So he has second thoughts but allows wifey to enjoy behind closed doors....his love and loyalty forced him to let her continue....now it's out of the box, it's done, she enjoyed and he didn't. What will happen with Vivek? She finds it so natural to seduce men, what else has she planned "as part of his fantasy"?? Is it his fantasy any more???
Uugh....just one sided!
Quote:Arunraja23
I love the way the story has been taken. But its a request for the author (puppy) to explain the way she has been enjoyed ?
Your narration of the feeling from sooraj side is extremely natural and tempting.