04-08-2019, 09:02 PM
Personally I feel too much expectations has killed the fun for lot of readers. Since the writer has given updates frequently in the beginning and has delayed at the end kind of made all restless. I repeat even though everybody angry for lack of updates , no one should have a right to criticize a writer and be thankful you are getting something to read on a public forum just for free and fun. Imagine those days where you could only read erotica on a magazine hiding it around lol. Blogs like these and content in these are someone's free time and its never easy to write and when your content is something like this imagine writing around people in your family , you need to find time to write peacefully when no one's around.
As for the lack of erotica in this story , I feel there's two takes to that , there's enough opportunities where Anvita could have really enjoyed some action with some resistance and could have avoided further damage to her marriage which could have been ideal way to lead this story yet I am not disappointed in the way the story is dealt , I have read enough wife trapped stories around Xossipy and there are still many going in Hindi where wife submits to milkman, watchman, and neighbors around and they are pure erotica and they are not bad as well. I am actually glad this is not one of them which would have made it mundane. So my opinion is this story is a good thriller with few good twists and currently one of the best no doubt else readers wouldn't have been screaming or venting out their frustrations.
Only complain I do have is why Prithvi? Why not any one else who is actively seeking her lol , that would have made readers feel little better , as always one who tries harder should reap benefits.
As for the lack of erotica in this story , I feel there's two takes to that , there's enough opportunities where Anvita could have really enjoyed some action with some resistance and could have avoided further damage to her marriage which could have been ideal way to lead this story yet I am not disappointed in the way the story is dealt , I have read enough wife trapped stories around Xossipy and there are still many going in Hindi where wife submits to milkman, watchman, and neighbors around and they are pure erotica and they are not bad as well. I am actually glad this is not one of them which would have made it mundane. So my opinion is this story is a good thriller with few good twists and currently one of the best no doubt else readers wouldn't have been screaming or venting out their frustrations.
Only complain I do have is why Prithvi? Why not any one else who is actively seeking her lol , that would have made readers feel little better , as always one who tries harder should reap benefits.