06-01-2019, 10:31 PM
Quote:The ImmortalsSgp2009
finally reading complete,
yaha tak ki kahani ekdam jhakkas thi boss!
Dragon holder aa gaya,
sabhi log fir se eK ho gaye
nair ji swargiya ho gaye
Ron bhi zinda hai
lekin ye Raaz ki powers ka raaj kya hai??
lisa aue dewan bhi Zinda hai
Morgan sach me mar gaya kya??
lagta ek masst ladai hone wali hai,
waise ek kami is kahani me kaafi suspense ka sambhavnye thi
lekin aapne jabran comedy dali hai isliye kahani me wo maja nahi raha
kahani achhi hai ,
Aur ye bahut achchi ho sakti thi, agar aap language aur suspense par dhyan dete
Ron ,lisa, morgan aur dewan in sab ki language se lagta hai jaise ye koi tapori ho
khair chodo ab to kahani finish hone ko aa gayi.
All the best buddy
Btw waiting for next update
itna bada review
thanks bro...
Aur Ron,dewan lisa abhi tak zinda kaise hain...uska bhi ek funda hain jo vaqt aane par maloom chalega story ke -- points batane ke liye shukriya aur jaha tak language ki baat hain to maine khud feel kiya hain ki thik nahi hain par koshish jaari hain
again thanks bhai