03-08-2019, 10:10 PM
If I'm not wrong, then Vandana Jain is the main character of this story. She is wife of Alok..(correct me if I'm missing something).
Vandana ki Abhi tak entry bhi nahi Hui hai.. Alok ki behan par itna concentrate karna thik nahi lagta... Story telling is outstanding. No doubt.
Lekin Vandana ka kirdar agar readers ke samne jaldi as jaye to achha hoga..
I liked your story and I'm looking forward to great updates..
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Vandana ki Abhi tak entry bhi nahi Hui hai.. Alok ki behan par itna concentrate karna thik nahi lagta... Story telling is outstanding. No doubt.
Lekin Vandana ka kirdar agar readers ke samne jaldi as jaye to achha hoga..
I liked your story and I'm looking forward to great updates..
REPS ADDED.