Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

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U r a gr8 story teller. Knowing my wife is proof of that. But gr8 authors sometimes make a mess of the story. U have messed it up. U just cant redeem urself. I have lost intrst in the story

yes i am a big fan of krish for a long time. this story is too good. but last few updates seems messed u

I have lately started to feel as if I'm watching some Bollywood thriller movie rather than reading an erotica (which is actually disappointing)
Although your writing skills and ideas are amazing and so damn logical but it lacks the crucial theme for which users are here on xossip ie "erotica". Honestly , I do not even remember , when I had cummed last while reading this story or got sexually turned on .The story lately has failed to provide sexual interest. 
It started so well in the beginning but I felt as if from he mid of the story, protagonist's ( Anvita & Atul) characters got suddenly changed and they were shown in a confusion state. Earlier Anvita was projected as a bold woman who had the sexual power and wittiness to control men ( she oftenly did that to Atul and used to call Atul a "boy" in that conversation mode. She had power over him) .It felt as if Anvita was on the path to convince Atul that a little sexual games were okay to go for.
But suddenly coz of so many characters , the story took a u turn and started on a totally different path

Yes , I do come online on regular basis just to know what's gonna happen next as I do not want to leave the story in mid but the eagerness to read it has definitely vanished.
I felt as if lately ,Krish had started focussing more on storyline and forgot that its in the genre of "erotica". The sexual scenes do come in but just like in all random Bollywood movies as if they are just a part of it and have to be shown mandatorily. "Turning on" the readers does not seem to be the crux of the story now.

I believe the real erotica, which is able to make impact is the one which has both storyline and logical sexual content revolving around it. You have given the best storyline any story could give but abruptly failed to deliver the latter part. I feel the reason for the timings of updating the story has got bad is because you are thinking a way too much in the storyline. You have made the story as way more complex than it should have been. Since the story is in its end phase so of course we can not expect a miracle. For sure juts like a Bollywood movie , you would be giving it a happy ending.

Sometimes in order to provide the best, even great writes make a mess of their stories but it does not mean they have lost it. There is always a next time.
On this I agree with Mr "Punjabi1slut" that story got ruined, but we all love you because you have never left any of your stories unfinished . I feel Mr "Punjabi1slut" should learn that from you as he too had written a really great but unfinished story which actually is more frustrating for readers ,depicting an attitude that you do not care for your readers. I wish he could continue the story as readers including me still aspire of that story.

Dear Krish ,I am sorry to give negative review of the story but may be that's only because I am a great fan of your writings and know what an amazing writer you are.You actually create impact on the mind by your convincing writing skills. 

Take care.