03-08-2019, 11:07 AM
Sahi hai buddy.... Tumari story mai kuch to hai... Like the way you are writing... Keep it up... Aise Hi likhte raho... This should be more romantic... Reshma ki chudai to vaise bhi honi hai.. ise kita jitni ho sake utni aaag lagavo dono taraf tab jake story me mazza aayega... aur sare readers ka interest bhi bana rahega...
Keep it up...
Keep it up...