30-07-2019, 08:15 PM
(28-07-2019, 11:52 PM)vabs333 Wrote: Bro very nice story but one suggestion.........
Shabana ko Sirf lalu ko hi chodkar pregnant karne do kyunki dusre kisi se chud gayi to vaisa maja nahi aayega jaise ab tak story me aaya hai shabana is my favourite character is liye ye suggestion de raha hu ki use Sirf lalu ke liye rakho baki aapki marji....... Keep going fastly....
Firstly thanks bro for liking
Now on ur suggetion agar tum voting section me shabana ka intro pado to waha uski story ka naam bhi bataya hai TRAPPED. So yaha jo relation bane hai wo zabardasti trap karke bane hai aur trap me pyar muhobbat ki koi jagah nahi hoti. Is story me neha ko chhodkar har charectar ko uska particular male charectar mila ya mile hai jaise vineeta ka lakhan, garima ka hariya kaka jeetu, neetu ka aghori, to shabana ke hisse me jo charectar aya hai Lalu wo itna moral aur ethics wala nahi hai na uske dil me koi pyar muhobbat hai to waha aap jada expect mat karo. Garima ki story me jitna changement possible tha maine kar diya par shabana ki story jis track par itni aage nikal aai hai waha ab uturn lena possible nahi hai.
Agar aap shabana ke shuruaati update pade to waha maine mention kara tha aane wale din shabana ko barbaad karke rakh dene wale the. And gangbang uski story ka essential part tha usko remove kar dena possible hi nahi hai.
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