30-07-2019, 01:54 AM
(29-07-2019, 10:13 PM)Dolly99 Wrote: BAHUT HEE DHAMAAKE DAAR UPDATE, MANSI KA KOI JABAAB NAHI.. MUJHE LAGTA HAI KEE SIRF MANSI KO DUNIA KEE NAZAR SE BACHAANE KE LIYE URMILA NE YAH KHABAR PHAILAAEE KEE MANSI KISEE AUR KEE NAHI MUN8M KEE BETI HAI ..LEKIN MANSI KO APNE GANG SE MILNE KE BAAD BHEE NAHI MAALUM KEE USSE GANG CHALAANE KE LIYE KYO SELECT KIA GAYA..
DUSRO KEE TARAH MERI BHEE BAHUT SEE FAVOURITE HAI JAISE , MANSI, MANU, ZEENAT, NIVEDITA, SUCHI , MERRA ETC LEKIN CHARACTERS SE JYADA MUJHE ISS STORY KA CONTENT, GHATNAAYE AUR NARRATION PASAND HAI...
KEEPIT UP BL DEAR,
WAITING FOR UPDATE...
One thing I can state that how dolly can state you have full story which u posted but yaar I only read your story in this forum only .....
I like first part most .....
2nd I don't like ......u know because of Manu
3rd part ok ....
But I definitely want you to bring fast update like 2-3 daily so that it will come from where u last post on last forum....... immediately two benefit ur story run like hell and second that's all writer want satisfaction of complitation of story which is the saga .....in this forum where atleast you have 4 friends who always comments and watch ur update lively ....like owls ...ha ha ha
Waiting