29-07-2019, 02:36 AM
Nice update and Mansi now comes in her true colors ....well mannered and dominant in her style .....even CID have no answer for her ......
That's why I like Manu and Champa ..... CM , security officer commissioner and even gunda heera and his sister respects them not because of their powerful sex act but their love and emotional feelings also ....
Now I put bitter portion also ....
1) who likes munim and sethji ......and u send them in very good conner for their misdeeds ..... But no need u bring them back .... don't know no readers like them back ?????
2) Manu spolit real sister mamata .........she exiles from her misadventures and get settled with her married life against her family will .......again u bring her but not mamata, but as cheap whore and she is pregnant ?????
3) Champa in past 10 updates only 2 times we enjoy her encounters and u r lowering her character on lowest level ....????
4) leela , Rekha , Puna and Mansi those r our near to the heart one you degraded them like cheap whore .....
5) those who love Manu now because of his fuck .....he becomes like gigolo for them u daily demands him but never marry him?????
Bhai story is not running anywhere that's my view but I know u r great story writer atlast quech our thurst ...
Superb story and I will only comments on Champa and Manu onwards.....