28-07-2019, 11:30 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-07-2019, 11:31 PM by Logan555. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Nice start of a story
And charectar ka intro bahut badiya tha specially unke liye chune gae faces bus vijay thakur ki patni thoda nonpopular face hai.
And lumbe lumbe updates me ek bada paragrabh ke beech me thoda thoda gape dete rehna chahiye jaise isi page me first para bahut lumba chala gaya.
Second thing jub story me kafi sare charectar hai aur har update me kirdaar change ho jate hai jaisa ki meri story me hai to jis kirdar par wo update hai uski ek pic update ke start me ya end me zaroor dalo isse page kholte hi wo pic dekhkar reader ko pata chal jata hai ye itna lumba update kis charctar par hai aur is wajah se kai baar lumba aur thoda bojhil update bhi in pics ki wajah se rochak ban jata hai. If u see my story mai jab bhi kisi kirdaar par update deta hu uski ek normal pic us update me zaroor daalta hu. Multi charectar story me to ye aur bhi zaroori hai.
And charectar ka intro bahut badiya tha specially unke liye chune gae faces bus vijay thakur ki patni thoda nonpopular face hai.
And lumbe lumbe updates me ek bada paragrabh ke beech me thoda thoda gape dete rehna chahiye jaise isi page me first para bahut lumba chala gaya.
Second thing jub story me kafi sare charectar hai aur har update me kirdaar change ho jate hai jaisa ki meri story me hai to jis kirdar par wo update hai uski ek pic update ke start me ya end me zaroor dalo isse page kholte hi wo pic dekhkar reader ko pata chal jata hai ye itna lumba update kis charctar par hai aur is wajah se kai baar lumba aur thoda bojhil update bhi in pics ki wajah se rochak ban jata hai. If u see my story mai jab bhi kisi kirdaar par update deta hu uski ek normal pic us update me zaroor daalta hu. Multi charectar story me to ye aur bhi zaroori hai.
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