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Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story
Mujhe laga hi tha ke jeetu ka bhai hi to nahi kaid kiya hua hai aur mera andaza sahi nikla kahaniyo me esse mod hote bade mast hai but mere liye thoda emotional ho jata hai ke preet ab jab jeetu ke sath settle ho gayi tab uska bhai vapas aaya
Ye situation jitni reader ke liye mast hai utni hi agar kahani ke characters ke view se dekhe to dukhi karna wali hai jise preet pyaar karti thi ab kaher ke roop me use dekh ke chid rahi hai mai us waqt ke bare soch raha hu jab preet ke ghar walo ko sachai pata chalegi kya beete gi

mai itna jyada sochta nahi hu kahani ke bare me but muje usi kahani me maza aata jisme mai characters ki feeling ko feel karke padhu aur yahi writer ki ache likhne ki baat prove hoti hoi ke reader characters ki feeling ko feel kar sake 

Ek kaam aur kar do kyu ke kahani ke character ke naam ka index bana do to jyada acha rahega kyu kafi din baad padhi to kuch naam bhul gaya mai thoda uske bare me bhi ek index mil jata to aur badhiya ho jayega
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RE: Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story - by Bestforme7 - 05-01-2019, 06:30 PM



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