04-01-2019, 10:33 PM
(20-11-2018, 09:08 AM)kavitakhullar Wrote:Baa kamaal kahania likh rahe o meri v kahanu tuc hi likho
Duja viah story tusi hun tak xossip tey padi .. preet da apney deor jeetu nal viah ho janda tey o waps apney sohrey ghar aa jandi sare ghar ch raunkaan mud waps aa jandia .. bas kmi c tey eh k jeetu ajay b preet nu bhabhi smj ijjat maan dinda .. tey preet b usnu apna gharwala na smj deor smj e khushi khushi us ghar ch rehn lgi ethey tak story tusi xossip ch padi .. usdey close hon ton baad mein eh story agey continue krn lgi haan umeed a holi holi punjabi section dey sarey readers es site tey aa jangey ...
So mere valuable readers story da agla part .....
3rd update
Thand da mausam uton asmaan ch badl sham velley e enj lag eiha c jiven rat pay gyi hovey ... pura vehrda dhund nal bhar gya ..dangar wadey da kam muka preet chaunkey ch beithi dudh ubaldi chulley dey sek nal apney hathan nu sekdi bar bar buhey wal vekh ehi soch di aj jeetu ajay tak nyi sehron mudeya agey tan mud anda c ...es velley tak... keh k b nyi gya c der nal ayounga ... fer kithey reh gya .. dopehr dey bibi bapu ji b massi di khair khabr lain wandey challey gye c
Kayi dina di keh rahi c bibi bapuji nu apni bhain kol jaan lyi ..ageyo kuch din college ch jeetu nu b chuttia c ...ehi soch dopehrey bibi apni bhain nu milan bapiji naal wandey tur gyi ... ..
'Eh munda aa janda' chulley ch lakr pa agg da sek wadhandi preet burburayi' roti tuk da kam muka aram nal kamrey ch beithdi ethey tan thand e vohat a .. '
'Shukr a aa gya' cycle lay andar andey jeetu nu vekh sakoon da sah lendi preet burburayi ...
'Ah layo bhabhi tuhada smaan' cycle ton thailla lah chaunkey ch preet kol aa khada hunda jeetu bolea
'Oh tan theek a ..' jeetu ton thaila fad preet us wal vekhdi boli' aj eni der kyoun la diti .. mausam vekh kinna khrab a ..'
'O bhabhi tesan tey gaddi late c ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' bibi kithey a ..'
'Dasea tan c tenu bibi ney aj wandey jana' sar chuk jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
'Oh mein bhul e gya' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
'Tun kapdey bdl lay mein roti tuk da ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli' puria wahan da sweater pa lavin thand vohat a ..'
'Nyi roti nyi khani ajay bhukh nyi ...' kamrey wal janda jeetu bolea' halley time b ena nyi hoyea bdl tey dhund kaarn hanera lag riha ..'
'Chal theek a jad khani hoyougi das devin' chulley uton ubldey dudh da patila chuk ek passey rakhdi preet boli
' cha bna layo bhabhi ..' bda chit karda ..'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' thand vohat a'
'Tun kapdey bdl lay ....uni der mein cha banadi haan ..' thand ch preet da apna chit kar riha c cha peen da... patili chuk chulley tey rakhdi kamrey wal jandey jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli' sweater jarur pa lawin....'
'Layo ji gram gram cha peo' cha dey dono gilas hath ch fdi preet eh kehndi hoyi kamrey andar aan e lgi c k dehleej tey e ruk gyi... andar jeetu nu sheeshey mohrey khad apney wall swarda vekh hassa e nikl aya usda ..
Pith c us wal .. shyad kapdey badlda badlda sheeshey ch apney aap nu vekhn ch ena ulj gya k kurta paan da dhiyan b nayi riha ..eni thand ch b upron nanga ..thand nyi lgdi es mundey nu.. kuch sochdi hoyi preet kehn e lgi c thand lag jayougi kuch pa lay mundeya par keh na saki ..buhey tey khadi khadi usdi nangi pith nu nihardi gaur na usdey uchey lambey bharwey jism wal vekhn lgi.. sohna ucha lamba kad niklya a jeetu da .. 3/4 salan ch pura gabru jwan ho gya... majboot modey fulley hoye wahan dey dolley .. chauri tagri pith ... kini der khadi nihardi rahi ...
'Bas kar hor kinnia ku chuzzan marnia sheeshey nu' .. kol aa apney dhiyan ch rujey sheeshey wal vekhdey jeetu nu cherdi preet hasdi hoyi boli' kapdey paa lay thand lag jayougi ...'
'Ohhh o o bhabhi ...' gal na suji jeetu nu ki boley manjey tey pya kurta chukda bolea' cha ban gyi ..'
'Haan' jeetu di nangi hik wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli' mein tan kado di lay k khadi c par jnab tan sheeshey mohrey ..'
'O bhabhi bas ..' galley ch kurta fsa panda hoyea jeetu apni jhep mitan di kosis karda bolea
'Tera kasoor nyi' hasdi hoyi preet boli' jwani ch sarey mundeya da ehi haal hunda' aahh lay fad cha pee'
'Ruko jra ... ' apney galley ch fsey kurtey nu thalley karda muskuranda jhepda jeetu hassan di kosis karda bolea..
Cha dey gilass dona hathan ch fdi kuch na boli preet akhan tikayi jeetu di nangi chauri majboot hik wal muskurandi hoyi vekhn lgi .. apney aap e usdi njar haithan nu jeetu dey pattan wal fislan lgi ..pajamey andar shant lun da njar anda ubaar vekh bull tukdi ek baar tan sochan ch pay gyi preet .. sahi e das rahi c jaspreet .. andaza landi akhan nal napn si kosis kardi nu jaspreet di gal sahi lagan lgi ... chahey shant c par fer b andaza lana aukha nayi c preet lyi kinna ku wada mota tey lumba kala sap hoyouga jeetu da ..
'Deo chah ..' jeetu di awaz sun ek dum apnia njran usdey pattan ton hta usdean akhn ch vekhdi preet boli' sweater tan pa lay ...'
'Koi na paa layounga bhabhi' preet dey hathon cha da gilass fad ghut bharda hoyea jeetu bolea' bibi kiney bjay gyi ..'
'Dopherey.' majey tey beithdi hoyi preet boli' tun tan bhul e gya aj bibi ney jana jaldi ghar aa jawan ..par pta nayi tera dhiyan kithey rehnda. .'
' chetey nyi riha aj jana c unha ney ..' preet kol e manjey tey beithda jeetu kuch sochda hoyea bolea' fer tan aj asin ghar ch ekeley ...'
'Haan kyoun ..' ek baar tan dil dharak uthea preet da jeetu di gal sun ..
'mera matlab aj tan sarey kam tuhanu e karney painey ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea ..
'Muka lye sarey kam ..' dhar kad lyi .. dangra nu pathey pa andar b kar dita .'Hasdi hoyi preet boli' hun tan bas roti took da reh gya das devin jad khani hovegi ...'
'Ajay nyi khani' cha da khali gilass ek passey rakh manjey ton uth sweater chuk panda jeetu bolea 'acha bhabhi mein huney aya ...'
' hun kithey challea .. eni thand ch ' jeetu nu bahar janda vekh preet boli ..' hanera ho gya'
'Bas thori der ch aya bhabhi ..' kahli kahli ch kamrey ton bahar niklda jeetu bolea ..' jra kam a kisi naal...'
'Thand vohat a ...aa ja rajayi ch beih ja ..' majney tey beithi preet mungfali chabdi jeetu nu kamrey ch aya vekh chaukri mar beith rajaayi nal apney goddey dhakdi boli
'Sahi keh rahey o bhabhi aj tan sachin thand jyada a ..dhund pay rahi a bahr ..' preet wal vekhda thand nal kambda jeetu bolea
'Hor ki ajay 6 e bjey ney enj lagda jiven adi raat ho gyi hovey ...mein tan jaldi jaldi kam mukaye ..thand naal bura hall c ... aaa ja rajayi ch beith. .' manjey tey ek passey hundi preet jeetu lyi jagah bnandi boli
'Es baar lagda thand jyada payo gi' manjey tey preet samney chaukri maar beithda jeetu rajayi naal apney goddey dhakda bolea
'Aah lay mungfli kha ... ' gud di dheli tey mungfali nal bhari hoyi thalli rajayi utey rakh jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli' sehar di mungfali da swad e vakhra hunda' ..
' meinu tan chetey e bhul gya c tusi mungfali mangwayi ..o tan jad chetey aya pehlan mungfali liti fer baki smaan' mungfali da chilka lah giri kad chabda hasda hoyea jeetu bolea 'shukar a chetey aa gya nyi tan dobara sehr jana paina c ..'
'Hye sachin' chehkdi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli
'hor ki bhabhi pehli baar tusi koi cheez mangwayi c ...' gud di dheli chuk dandi wad hasda hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea' lya k tan deni paini c ...'
'Acha ji .. ' preet b hasdi hoyi boli' eh tan das aj eni der kidan ho gyi sehar ch ...tun tan kehnda c jaldi mud aana aj ..'
'O bhabhi bas ..' thalli vichon mungfali chukda jeetu bolea' yaaran dostan nal sehar ghuman firan chalea gya ..'
'Yaaran dostan nal k rupi nal ..'mungfali chabdi preet gaur nal jeetu wal vekh usnu cherdi boli..
' tuhanu kidan .. mera matlab tuhanu kis ney dasea' jhepda hoyea jeetu bolea
' gya c rupi naal' muskurandi chehkdi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli...
'Haan' ena keh edar udar vekhda jeetu bolea' rastey ch unha dey pind utar gye ..kehndi sada pind vekh lay'
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'Oye hoye munda sohrey pind ja k aya' chehkdi chulbali hassi hasdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli
'Nyi nyi' ek dum bolea jeetu' ghar nyi gya usdey'
'Naley apey keha rupi dey pind gya c' dhiyan nal jeetu nu vekhdi boli preet
'Haan par unha dey ghar nayi' .. 'Teshan ton thori e dur unha dey khet ney nal e unha da amba da baag c' kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea
'Oye hoye saheli nal amban dey baag ch ' akhan matka bharwatey chuk preet hasdi hoyi boli
'Ki bhabhi tusi b..' preet di gal sun sharma e gya jeetu
'Kyoun.kyoun ki mein b ' jeetu nu cherdi preet dey munh vichon
Pta nyi kidan nikl gya ...' fer chuppey preet dey bag dey amb..'
'Nyi bhabhi ..Aj kal kehra ambn da mausam ' preet wal vekh jeetu bolea..
'Oh haan sach ..' gal sambln di kosis kardi preet boli shukar c jeetu usdi tichar nayi samjeya
'Vohat wda amban da bag a unha da ...' mungfali kha gud di dheli nu dandi wad da jeetu bolea
'Acha ..' jidan jeetu masoom jeha ban das riha c na rok saki preet apney aap nu fer usnu cherdi boli' sara baag dikhaya rupi ney
'Haan bhabhi .. ' mein tan thak e gya
Baag ch turdey turdey ...' sehaj swah ch gal karda jeetu bolea
'Beh jana c kitey' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli ' hor kon c naal ..'
'Koi nyi bas asin dono' mungfali chuk khanda jeetu bolea
'Hye sachin ...tusi dono baag ch ekeley.' gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet muskurandi hoyi usnu cherdi boli' fer tan ..'
'Edan da kuch nyi bhabhi' boldey boldey shrma gya jeetu munh usda lal hon lga
'Fer kidan da kuch' akhan matkandi jeetu nu sharm nal lal hunda vekh preet usnu hor cherdi boli' jaffi juffi tan payi honi saheli nu ..'
'Nayi bhabhi mein nyi' ach khachanda hoyea jeetu bolea' rupi ney payi c ..'
'Hye sachin matlab tun sharmanda reh gya tey jaffi b rupi ney aap..' jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli' meri deorani tan bdi tez nikli ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharma k mungfali chabda edar udar vekhn lga...
'Usney jaffi payi tun kuch nyi ..' gaur nal jeetu da chehra pdan di kosis kardi preet usdean akhan ch vekhdi boli
'mein ki ..' haklanda sharmanda ena bol chup e kar gya jeetu ..
'Budu a tun b ..' hasdi hoyi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli' kudi ney aap tenu jaffi payi tey tere kolon baag ch kuch b nyi ...'
'Edan thori bhabhi j koi aa janda uthey fer ..' ek dum bolea jeetu
'Hye meria rabba tun tan kudi nalo b jyada darda' jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi preet boli' tere kolon tan kudi nu jaffi b nyi pyi o b bechari nu aap pani pyi ...tun hor ki...' boldi boldi ruk gyi preet
Kuch na bolea jeetu mungfali khanda edar udar kamrey ch vekhn lga..
'Lassi karwa diti tun tan jeetu' hasdi hoyi preet boli' ki sochdi hoyougi rupi ... kinna budu a jeetu'
'Nyi bhabhi ena b budu nyi ..' bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu ......
'Rehn dey rehn dey pta menu' jeetu wal vekhdi preet fer usnu cherdi boli
'Oh tan bas jijhak riha c .. mein' kuch soch preet ton akhn churanda jeetu holi jehi bolea' fer tan rupi e mintan kardi c na kar jeetu koi aa jayouga ..'
'Ki keha ..' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney puchea .sun tan lya c preet ney ki keha jeetu ney fer b swad lendi hassdi hoyi boli' ki keha tun ..'
'Kuch nyi' hasda hoyea jeetu bolea' rupi nu puch layeo mein budu haan k nyi ..'
'Oh ho acha ji' muskurandi hoyi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli' matlab kanto fulln tey lay e ayea sada jeetu ...'ena bol uchi uchi hassan lgi preet .....
' katto tan aap ayi c fullan tey..' halka halka sharma k hasda hoyea jeetu bolea..
'Oh ho ..' jeetu dey munh ton eh sun hasdi hoyi preet b swad lendi boli' fer tan palosi honi kanto ...'
'Palosni paini c ..' jhijhak mitta khulda hoyea jeetu bolea' hun j rupi aap...'
'Oye hoye' akhan matkandi preet dey munh ton bina sochey samjey nikl gya' ki ki kita fer ..'
'pehlan tan aap jaffi paa menu tichar krn lgi gallan e andia k kuch hor..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali khanda jeetu boleea' jad mein jaffi paan lga fer agey agey bhjan lgi ...'
'Fer' gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet usda chehra pdan di kosis kardi boli
'Fer ki amb dey buttey pichey fad k ghut k jaffi pa lyi udon kehndi chad dey jeetu koi aa jayo ..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali chabda jeetu bolea
'Oh ho fer ..' ajay b yakeen nyi c preet nu k jeetu sach bol riha
'Fer ki hasda hoyea jeetu bolea' mud k nyi tichar karugi menu .... har baar
kehndi hundi c bas gallan e krnia andia k ..'
'Hye sachin bdi chakmi saheli a teri Fer tan ....dasna c gallan e nyi hor kuch b anda ..' jeetu di gal sun akhan matkandi preet boli
'Lag gya pta usnu Fer tan kahey na kar na kar..' sharmanda muskuranda jeetu bolea
'Oye hoye ki na kar...' jeetu nu cherdi preet boli
'Ki bhabhi tusi b ...' akhan churanda jeetu edar udar vekhda bolea
'Ki mein...' hasdi hoyi preet boli' baag ch mundey nu kudi aap lay k gyi ... fer kahdi na kar na kar .. mundey ney tan hath ayi patola saheli napni e c ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharmanda muskuranda hoyea edar udar vekhn lga .. bhabhi eni khul k tichar karugi umeed nyi c usnu ..
'Nap lyi fer ..' muskurandi mungfali chabdi preet jeetu wal vekh hasdi akhn matkandi boli
'Haan ...' achkhachnda muskuranda haklanda hoyea jeetu ena bol preet dey hathon mungfali dean kadiyean giria chuk chabda bolea
'Oye hoye sachin ..' apni hik tey hath rakh jeetu nu vekhdi preet nu yakeen nyi hoyea jo usney jeetu dey munh ton sunea sach a k jooth ..'
'Hor ki bhabhi ..' gud di dheli nu dandi wad khanda jeetu bolea ..' jad ghut k jaffi pyi ghabrandi hoyi boli' hye eni jaan jeetu ... '
'Fer' jeetu dey gatheeley jism nu nihardi preet boli
'Fer ki bhabhi .. lag gya pta usnu gallan e nyi hor b kuch anda menu..' muskuranda nimma nimma hasda jeetu bolea
'Sachin.. 'chehkdi hoyi preet boli' waisey hor ki anda .
'Sab kuch . Muskuranda sharmanda jeetu bolea' koi hor gall karo bhabhi menu dasdey nu sang lagdi a ..
'Acha ji uchi uchi uasdi hoyi preet boli' jad saheli nu jaffi payi udon nyi sang lgi ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli' das na hor ki ki ..'
'Tin char chumia littia usdean fer chadeya na na kari javey' sharmanda jijhakda bol e pya jeetu
Ohhh ... ' jeetu dey bulln wal vekhdi preet boli' bas chumia e littia hor kuch nyi..'
Nyi ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' Munh vekhn wala c usda dari hoyi ghabrayi hoyi mintan krn lgi jan dey jeetu menu koi vekh layouga .
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'Tun jan ditta..' jeetu di gal bdey dhiyan nal sundi preet boli
'Haan' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' mintan krn lag pyi c ..'
'Jhalla e a tun ena ku tan nakhra kardi e a kudi naley app lay k gyi tenu apney baag ch nap leni c' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
'Npi tan c bhabhi ghut k jaffi pyi c' kamrey ch edar udar vekhda sharmanda hoyea jeetu bolea
'Oh ho gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet usnu cherdi boli' hor kuch nyi kita'
'Nyi kehndi hanera ho riha chal hun waps chalea ..' nimma nimma hasda sharmanda jeetu bolea
'Oh tey waps aa gye tusi' thori hairaan ho gaur nal jeetu nu nihardi preet boli
'Haan ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu gal badlda bolea' kal vekhea na tusi ..kidan jaapreet bhabhi nal....