04-01-2019, 06:11 PM
aapakee lekhan shailee bahut achchhee hai. is kahaanee kee shuruaat behatareen hai. main hamesha us tarah kee vayask kahaaniyon ko pasand karata hoon, jisamen ek nimn varg ka aadamee ek bahut shaktishaalee, ameer, abhijaat varg ke parivaar kee mohila sadasyon ko bahakaata hai aur unhen apana vyaktitv banaata hai. apanee supar sekshual paavar ka istemaal karake. is kahaanee par mera ek sujhaav hai. agar aap ek-ek karake sarita, chanchal, poja, aaratee aur chaadanee ko bahakaane ke lie saadhu baaba banaate hain aur unhen apana yaun shikaar banaate hain. mujhe ummeed hai ki yah kahaanee ek hogee is manch mein sabase hot aur sabase kaamuk kahaaniyaan. aapakee shubhakaamanaen.