Me My Wife and the Local Gunda

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I don't think people are interested any more in this thread. Except yours, there are no comments. 

Someone please take it and extend. I will delete my part.

Please dont delete and give up 
the story lacks few things and it needs to be fixed first.

how rashmi developed interest towards javed immediately seeing him near their apartment. 
how she allowed him to touch her in the first instance. 

even though you wanna make the husband cuckold, it should not be this direct and fast. 
the affair should happen without the husband knowing it and somehow the husband should smell and find it. then investigate it and be in a situation that he cannot ask rashmi about this etc. 

there is a great scope in the story to make it hot.. but dont go fast.. develop the intimacy between javed and rashmi slowly. make them fall in love and make love outside and then in rashmi house when her husband in office and while on tour etc.