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Adultery Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust)
(12-07-2019, 11:51 AM)mraj1 Wrote: Dear Ajay,
Your writing style is commendable.
The way of narrative is superb.
Characterization was spot-on.
You have that x-factor in your stories which titillates the reader to the core.
The seduction and self-seduction of kavya was put in words splendidly.
Also the filthy language which opens up kavya's carnal desires was aptly used.
The start of Kavya's sexcapades was good.......!
Hope to read more of these....

P.S.: I would like you to repost your story MARYADA- A tale of lust in PDF if possible.

FROM A FAN of yours.
mraj1

thanks yaara..............thanks for appriciation...........aagey bhi saath bane rahiyega................

Reps added++1

(12-07-2019, 04:33 PM)Zee khan Wrote: Oh noooooo yar plzzzz... Ye ram boring item ko dur rakho yar story se... Bari mushkil se story ne rhythm pakra hai ap phr ram k peeche lag gae.... Plzzzzz noooo

yaar kuch bhi boring nahin hain............koshish karunga ki aap sabko bore na lage...............saath bane rahiyega.....
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RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 02-06-2019, 06:46 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 02-06-2019, 09:00 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 02-06-2019, 09:26 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 03-06-2019, 06:59 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 04-06-2019, 01:55 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 09-06-2019, 02:18 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 10-06-2019, 02:42 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 14-06-2019, 09:34 AM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 14-06-2019, 10:45 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 15-06-2019, 09:47 AM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 15-06-2019, 04:14 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 15-06-2019, 08:49 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 17-06-2019, 08:20 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 18-06-2019, 10:21 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 22-06-2019, 03:14 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 04-07-2019, 02:27 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 05-07-2019, 06:03 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 06-07-2019, 09:50 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 07-07-2019, 04:15 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Ajaykumar82 - 16-07-2019, 02:52 PM



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