14-07-2019, 01:53 PM
(14-07-2019, 01:25 PM)doonknightz Wrote: bahut sohne.....nice start......alag hi nazara aaunda tuhadi story pad ke......enna wadiya likhde ho ke jee karda padi jao.......
bahut wadiya mahol create karde ho...aap hi interest ban janda story wich....jiwe tussi enna sahi tareeke naaal explain karde ho sabh kujh.....
really loved it...
keep going KAVI ma'am
keep writing
Thank u so much ... kafi dinna baad story likhn da dil kitta tey us utey tuhada comment.. realy great moral boost to my story ... will try to conitnue n complete this story as early as possible