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Adultery Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust)
Dear Ajay,
Your writing style is commendable.
The way of narrative is superb.
Characterization was spot-on.
You have that x-factor in your stories which titillates the reader to the core.
The seduction and self-seduction of kavya was put in words splendidly.
Also the filthy language which opens up kavya's carnal desires was aptly used.
The start of Kavya's sexcapades was good.......!
Hope to read more of these....

P.S.: I would like you to repost your story MARYADA- A tale of lust in PDF if possible.

FROM A FAN of yours.
mraj1
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RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 02-06-2019, 06:46 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 02-06-2019, 09:00 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 02-06-2019, 09:26 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 03-06-2019, 06:59 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 04-06-2019, 01:55 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 09-06-2019, 02:18 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 10-06-2019, 02:42 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 14-06-2019, 09:34 AM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 14-06-2019, 10:45 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 15-06-2019, 09:47 AM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 15-06-2019, 04:14 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 15-06-2019, 08:49 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 17-06-2019, 08:20 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 18-06-2019, 10:21 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 22-06-2019, 03:14 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 04-07-2019, 02:27 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 05-07-2019, 06:03 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 06-07-2019, 09:50 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by Pappu pelu - 07-07-2019, 04:15 PM
RE: Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust) - by mraj1 - 12-07-2019, 11:51 AM



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