[Riyaps]

The way the story is going has excelled in many aspects. Your regular updates are making the readers stick to the stories.

At this point I would like to suggest you few things which might help you in creating more intense story. Depending upon your liking, you decide whether to include or not.

Raghu somehow talks to Nisha and apologises her and tells her how he got manipulated and promise her to help her escape. But in the mean time she has to obey them. This gives Nisha a strong Hope to escape.

On the other hand, Tony sets few rules to Nisha failing which he will make her suffer more or cause harm to Vidya. As Nisha is hopeful, she accepts those rules. The rules are
1. She has to address everyone as master or sir no matter how small goon he is
2. She should never address her as first person. Instead she should address like “Your slave, your slut or your whore”. Eg: Master, Your slut wants to drink water.
3. She has no right to say no to anything.
And some more rules which you seem interesting.

She gets her nipples pierced or tattoos over her skin if needed. Bikesh etc who she had caught earlier gets an opportunity here to make her suffer more. Humiliation more than fucking, taking videos of her by making her talk dirty etc might be considered as well

The point is she being a strict officer has to succumb to them both physically and mentally and wait for the right opportunity to escape with the help of Raghu. She herself turning into a slave temporarily might make the story more engaging I guess. I’ve taken my reference from the story “Teacher’s Dilemma” by Justerotic in Literotica website (Chapter 2 and page 2 to be in specific).

It’s just a suggestion. Just give a thought. But the story is going really great