[masochist]

You have wrote about your frustration on a post that nobody replies or adds suggestion and you will write on your own idea and pace. See, your story improved immediately. I will suggest you follow your heart, don't give too much weight on your readers idea.

I have seen this countless time authors loose their way by readers comments and suggestion.

Remember the list of idea you have posted earlier, making Chitra fat by eating a lot more, there were more ideas on that post. You can follow those. Muthu and Chitra falling in love maybe the weakest point of this story. Now that sarooja playing a main part of this story. Storyline now have a great potential. Good luck, you are doing great!!