[Celebrorn]

I think there wasnt much interest in this story so I have decided to not continue it. It can be very time consuming and mentally draining to write a story, and besides feedback from people there is no other reward for doing it. But it’s surprising that people are reluctant to provide that feedback

Here is the outline of the plot in my mind ahead. The immediate next ones are more detailed / firm. The plot further ahead is still subject to change or more thoughts.

1. Suhani neeche jaati hai aur chupke se Jiju aur Prachi ke beech ladayi hote hue sunti hai, kuch paiso ko lekar ya kisi kharche ko lekar. Woh is baat ko us din Prachi aur uske Papa wali baat se link karti hai.

2. Prachi use dekh kar wahan se chali jaati hai, aur Suhani aur Samar thodi der ke liye akele ho jaate hai. Samar usse aise hi casually poochne ki koshish karta hai ki uske aur Adi ke beech mein sab theek hai na, par Suhani ko thoda bura lagta hai, particularly isliye kyunki us raat ke baad bas Jiju use kamre mein bina kuch kahe chhod gaye they. Use apni feelings samajh nahi aa rahi hoti.

3. Prachi aur Adi bhi wapas aa jaate hai. Thoda sa awkward sa dinner hota hai, Prachi aur Jiju mahaul ko light karne ki koshish karte hai par Adi ko wapas kamre mein jaane ki jaldi hoti hai.

4. Prachi ki advice par Suhani pehle kamre mein jaati hai aur ek sexy si night dress pehen kar bed par let jaati hai. Adi kamre mein aakar use bhookhi nazron se dekhta hai aur us par toot padta hai. Dono ke kapde utar jaate hai aur Adi thoda jangli hota hai besabr ho raha hota hai. Woh finally Suhani ke andar apna lund ghusa deta hai par uska jaldi se nikal jaata hai. Suhani satisfy nahi feel karti par kuch kehti nahi hai. Adi kafi embarrased feel kar raha hota hai aur bolta hai ki Suhani ne use kuch jyada wait karaya… shayad isliye.