11-11-2026, 12:51 PM
(11-11-2026, 12:01 PM)Lord Obunaga Wrote: Best story. Bahot kam stories aisi hai jinhone mera dhyan apni taraf kheecha hai aur kuch 3-4 stories hai jinhe padhkar meri dilchaspi usme through the roof hui.
Aapki story kamal ki hai aur aapse nivedan hai ise ant tak pahocha ke hi viram dijiyega. Is story ne mujhe aisa bandha ki mai kich aur kar nhi paya in 2 dino sirf aapki sotry starting se lekar ab tak padhi hai. Aur ab agle update ka intezaar hai.
Isme ek pal bhi aisa nhi tha jab boriyat hui ho aur har ek cheez ki detailing aur characters ki personalities especially Jay urf Prithvi ki aur Sex ke waqt galiyo ka mishran ek alag hi utsah badhata hai.
Aaj se mujhe apna permanent story reader samajhiye. Aapke agle update ka intazar rhega.
Finally, i must say that you have mastered the art of story telling.
Ab tak toh kamal ki sotry rhi hai asha hai aage bhi aisi hi rhegi lekin jab bhi mujhe lagega mai aapko honest aur fair review bhi dunga.
Keep going!
Ok, I am glad to read your comments, keep stay in this thread long lasting..