[Paty@123]

We still don’t understand what you are trying to say in some of the chapters. 

Anjali and Azad’s relationship has already been found out by Sunny. We still don’t understand how Sunny is taking this. 

Sometimes he looks at his mother’s breasts and hips and gets aroused. Sometimes he thinks about it and feels worried. 

Whenever Anjali has physical relations with Azad, if Sunny asks about it, Anjali only shows a controlling attitude towards Sunny. When her husband died and she struggled to raise Sunny, that is understandable. But everything she is doing now only humiliates Sunny. And when he asks about it, she just repeats the old dialogue, “I struggled to raise you.” 

What is she doing to Sunny now? Let’s see. 

After two days Azad will come to the house, tell Sunny to go out, and then they will have sex again. Thinking about that, Sunny will get self-pleasure. 

Apart from this, what else is going to happen in this story? 

Please turn Sunny into a cuckson and make him a son who has no anger in his heart. Anjali is already treating Sunny like that.

If not, then show him as a son who questions/opposes his mother. 
You are dragging it out without doing either of the two.

It’s okay if the story progresses slowly, but we still don’t know what direction it is heading. 

Azad comes, they have sex, Sunny gets self-pleasure, and if Sunny asks Anjali about it she will say “I struggled to raise you.” Apart from this, what else is happening in this story? 

We don’t even know when the next chapter is coming… The readers don’t even know whether the story writer is reading all this or not.

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It has been narrated to son right from I think second chapter, how difficulties she has faced since five years for his studies and to support the house, she has made it clear to son that she is eligible to enjoy herself, Now she categorically saying to the son that an affair with benefits and she does not care whatever others think, which right from the beginning she is saying, she is enjoying whether it is the home or outside, son is sometime thinking with erection, some time thinking, getting erected by seeing her body thi only repeated, story is going without direction and without direct erotic scenes, what is there in writer's mind unable to predict