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Paty@123 wrote:

First of all the writer of this story is cross roads how to take and in which direction story has tobe taken, reason why same theme is repeated, the theme is son is waiting outside and clearly Anjali participating in Romance with Azad or in sex with Azad, or other wise Anjali talking with Azad in the phone, whatever it maybe just asking the son to wait separately and participating in erotic scenes whether it is romance or massaging little semi nude or nude and I think no shyness, the son helplessly get erected and ejaculated, I think In that position, if any body whether it is son or father irrespective of any will either mastrubate or ejaculate because of mentally erotic condition, so I request the writer to make the story run with faster, I don't say erotic scenes should not be there, but story should also run plz, I think writer will understand and do positively, and also Do not make the Son as helpless and already in the beginning episodes of story itself you have narrated son's charector as willing and helping his mother directly in her affair, Now it is the time where he has to show his decent and make them to have their activities somewhere else other than their flat, or he has to go out and seek an accomodation and looking for his interest, otherwise he will go for his mental distruction, let us see what is there in writer's mind, I would like to say the updates are not coming as fast in the beginning,
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wxxxx wrote:

The author is steering the story in the right direction. It centers on a lower-middle-class family: Sunny and his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, who live in a one-room flat—a setting where, unlike in upper-class or middle-class households, maintaining privacy is not possible. Readers want to experience the story through Sunny’s perspective (POV). They clearly appreciate the author’s thoughtfulness and creativity.