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According to the initial trajectory of the story, Chapter 29 marks a disastrous turn. Chitra is an innocent character who has never navigated this world of pleasure; she is like a foundling adrift in a vast world of eroticism. She has never experienced or partaken in a threesome like an FFM dynamic, yet you suddenly introduce a BDSM-style gangbang that is literally at a pornstar level.
Chitra’s innocence should instead evolve gradually into that of a bold, powerful, and confident woman—not a cheap street figure who sleeps with anyone just for the sake of it. She should slowly discover this erotic world with the help of Saroja and Muthu, evolving step by step. This plot twist brought about corruption far too quickly.
Her shyness, her traditional and conservative ideas as an accommodating woman in Indian society, and her grief as a mother who has just lost her child—these are the elements that should dictate how she slowly transforms into an intoxicating femme fatale. That should be the core of the plot.
Regardless, it is your story and you are the creator of this world, but I was quite disappointed with this chapter.Please, do not write the story just for the sake of quick gratification. Write it strictly according to the depth and pacing of the plot you originally intended.

Sorry for the late feedback!

Thanks for ur feedback... However one doubt....Did u really read the whole update??

This whole update was a dream by chithra...
She didnt sleep with saroja or had any gangbang.. Thats y the word dream i marked in red color and shown chithra in sleeping pose...